LIFE (Palindrome)

LIFE (Palindrome)

A Chapter by Dhaye
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complexity

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Life  makes a complexity of emotions

It takes a room for doubtful devotions

It’s like a game, everyone should be wise

Don’t always blame, just try to be nice

Share your voice, give and take

A choice you have to make

Play, be brave

Make way

~Crave~

Make way

Be brave, play

You have to make a choice

Give and take, share your voice

Just try to be nice, don’t always blame

Everyone should be wise, it’s like a game

A room for doubtful devotions, it takes

A complexity of emotions, life makes.







© 2014 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
Palindrome Poetry (Also Known as Mirrored Poetry)

A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same forward or backward. It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running back again...

*Here I made rhyming lines. The rhyme scheme is aabbccdd-ddccbbaa

I have chosen "life" as the subject of this mirrored poetry because I believe that life is what we make it- we reap what we sow...a mirror of our deeds.



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A beautiful and powerful poem.
"Play, be brave
Make way
~Crave~
Make way
Be brave, play"
You have led the reader to wisdom. I like the above lines a lot. Take no chances. Know no joy. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. Happy reading to you, CP.



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A creatively penned poem full of morally holistic wisdom, thanks as well for the info on a Palindrome, always great to learn new types of writing techniques !

Marvelous indeed Daise/Dhaye ?

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Dhaye is my nick name. Daisie (plural of Daisy without s) is my real name. I decided to use it since.. read more
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Tom.
You have worked hard , tasteful picture, interesting music, well formatted poem. You get the meaning across very well. Well done.

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, GAA.
i would not be making comment on the structure because i am not familiar with it but i first i thought it was a shape poetry. The message is powerful. True, instead of blaming others for the consequences of our choices, we must stand by it or at least do some corrective measures if it's shown that it was a "bad choice". i am internalizing the wisdom of your words in here, Daisie.

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Palindrome will really make different shapes depending on the position of the text- left, center or .. read more
A beautiful and powerful poem.
"Play, be brave
Make way
~Crave~
Make way
Be brave, play"
You have led the reader to wisdom. I like the above lines a lot. Take no chances. Know no joy. No weakness in the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot. Happy reading to you, CP.
Great write, naked truth expressed in a fantastic way, loved it

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks. And I have chosen "life" as the subject of this mirrored poetry because I believe that life .. read more
Linda alexander

10 Years Ago

You welcome, I agree with you fully, take care
Its so many style .... This one resembles an hour glass pattern

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

It just so happened that the lines are becoming shorter up to the 8th line, so when inverted (as the.. read more
Another neat new (to me) type of poetry. Your poem flows so quickly and smoothly that when I was reading it, it almost seemed like a rap song. I loved it, you are a master poet.

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the flattering words, but I'm not a master poet, Eddie. Just an aspiring poet (developing.. read more
Life’s a garden of entangled moods reaching for the Sun, dreaming for the Moon, thirsting for the Earth. When I write with both my hands simultaneously my left hand writes the mirror image of my right hand. There’s a natural mirror symmetry within Nature.

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Aethereal. =)
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Pax
nice! yet there is this one particular line didn't read much in reverse, almost the same in the other one... yet anyways, this is a good learning, it must be hard to pen this... you did well pretty friend.

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

"a" lang ang kulang nyan, pero no doubt na ako jan...reverse naman talaga dapat, babaliktarin yung .. read more
Pax

10 Years Ago

impressive nga eh... keep it up! okay na siya, nawala lang ako sa 'a' na nakalimutan mo... :D
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

LOL. Hindi ko agad nabasa yung "okay" mo sa taas.
That is so impressive, being able to make it so the verses make sense backwards and forward. It certainly gives a lot to think about about life and the journey we take.

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Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I really enjoy making different poetry forms. Glad you like this.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Yes I noticed you have been trying quite a few forms lately… that is great, expanding your horizon.. read more

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