I AM HOME  (Octosyllables)

I AM HOME (Octosyllables)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

in you

"



Only your words can make me smile
Like no more reason I could cry
You hug and kiss me through the mile
Your love shines through, we both know why

Only your voice can make me strong
Like no more reason to fall down
You help me see where I belong
I care no more for those who frown

Only your heart can fill my dreams
Like no more cause to like new things
Within the rain I see sunbeams
A balanced life is what it brings

Dear, only you is whom I love
When I found you, I stopped to roam
You are the gift that's great to have
With you I'm safe, I'm truly home.




© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Octosyllable
A metrical line of eight syllables, such as iambic tetrameter. A verse consisting of eight-syllable lines.

*Here, each line is an octosyllable.

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A great poem on love and belonging. Often in life comes along a special person who helps us to see life in the right perspective and to realize our true calling, our mission in life. It's a great feeling you have done full justice to in this lovely poem, Dhaye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Divya. Glad you like this piece.



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beautiful Dhaye....exquisitely composed. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Anne.
"I care no more for those who frown

Only your heart can fill my dreams
Like no more cause to like new things"

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow. One of your best Dhaye.
"Like no more cause to like new things
Within the rain I see sunbeams
A balanced life is what it brings"

I'm blown away. The music too is so romantic...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

No really. Moving...You are welcome...:)...............
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

.......... =)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

:).........................
Very interesting my friend and enjoyable read...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, AA.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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