I AM HOME  (Octosyllables)

I AM HOME (Octosyllables)

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

in you

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Only your words can make me smile
Like no more reason I could cry
You hug and kiss me through the mile
Your love shines through, we both know why

Only your voice can make me strong
Like no more reason to fall down
You help me see where I belong
I care no more for those who frown

Only your heart can fill my dreams
Like no more cause to like new things
Within the rain I see sunbeams
A balanced life is what it brings

Dear, only you is whom I love
When I found you, I stopped to roam
You are the gift that's great to have
With you I'm safe, I'm truly home.




© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Octosyllable
A metrical line of eight syllables, such as iambic tetrameter. A verse consisting of eight-syllable lines.

*Here, each line is an octosyllable.

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A great poem on love and belonging. Often in life comes along a special person who helps us to see life in the right perspective and to realize our true calling, our mission in life. It's a great feeling you have done full justice to in this lovely poem, Dhaye.

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Divya. Glad you like this piece.



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To be with the one you love truly is like being home. I love this reference...and this form..it fits your beautiful words so well. A gorgeous poem my friend.

:) Julie

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Ms. J.
What a beautiful write speaking of a love that comforts the heart. A love once found there is no need to explore but only reside in the safe haven of its embrace. Truly adored this poem, wonderful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Kalypso.
Lovely poem, all the drops of love you've distilled into the blank paper of life making a life gratifying to livef for love. I adore this beautiful poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Nathan.
nicely done as far as form....and finally we might find home...and it is with that right person that makes our heart feel cozy and comfy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

In our lives, we will find a person whom we'll be comfortable with. We never need to wear "make-up" .. read more
Nice write Daisie enjoyed the poem very emotive. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
very sweet love poem. keep writing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
A great poem on love and belonging. Often in life comes along a special person who helps us to see life in the right perspective and to realize our true calling, our mission in life. It's a great feeling you have done full justice to in this lovely poem, Dhaye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Divya. Glad you like this piece.
Within the rain I see sunbeams
A balanced life is what it brings

Love those lines, life is a balancing act for sure. The whole poem is a wonderful expression of love at its finest.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Life is always wonderful because of love, isn't it?
Thanks for the read and the kind words.
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Oh it truly is, I believe that saying is true, "Love makes the world go round"
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

........... =)
Good music and beautiful poetry.
"Dear, only you is whom I love"
no weakness in the amazing poetry for love.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks, CP.
Another wonderfully joyous poem. Very nicely done as always, Dhaye.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Eddie.

Love is everywhere
Love is everything
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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