EVEN IF (Quatrain)

Just a scribble...

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Even if the promises were broken, I shall live

Even if the love was gone, I shall pursue to give
And if our story ended, I'll keep on believing
For in every end there comes another beginning...

Author's Note

"Let go of yesterday. Let today be a new beginning and be the best that you can, and you'll get to where God wants you to be." ---Joel Osteen

Reviews

[Aethereal]

Your poem sends my poetic imagination into a frenzy: I was inspired to write this rendition of your poem which you may keep as your own. I used many of your words:

Transcend

Even if your promises are broken,
I shall live.
Even if your love is just a token,
I shall give.

Should our story ever end,
I’ll keep believing
for in time love must transcend
beyond receiving.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Aethereal.

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! This poem is mostly yours. As I said, it's just one rendition of many possible renditions following your creative lead. Do with it as you like. I was fun to write in itself. If we love with the motivations of receiving, do we really love at all? Love isn’t a commodity.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

............. =)

[Legion]

A circle of hope. Well defined.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Legion.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such inspiring and enlightening words, I would love this poem no matter what form you did it in.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, cowboy. =)

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

You are very welcome hon :)

[NeiL ArandA]

Beautifully penned Dhaye . Short and simple but speaks volume .

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Neil. I love concise pieces nowadays. They are not time-consuming. LOL

[gabrielle]

i love the message, dhaye. Something has to end to give way to something greater/better.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Gab. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Change comes from within and with God's help we can achieve miracles in the mundane and the spiritual. In all beginnings we let go of something to make room for another. Excellent...:)............

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)..................