DO YOU?

some questions

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Do you know...
when I cry about you
feeling your trouble and hardship as mine?
I can feel the flowing of sweat and blood
as you continue your hard work
without someone who takes care of you.

Do you feel...
when I care about you
trying to ease your pain and wipe your tears?
I know how you are trying so hard to get
something so valuable in your life
but seems so hard to hold.

Do you see...
when I cry and worry
and how my tears flow like rivers thinking of you?
I feel the ache in your chest
the memoirs of your past is still there
etched in the walls of your heart.

Do you believe...
when I say I will always love you?
I know how different we are
from time and place
when and where we are now.

But I will always believe
I will always love you
I will always pray for you
I will be here...

A friend forever.

Author's Note

Music: Best Friends Forever



Anaphora
Repetition of the same word or phrase at the beginning of successive clauses or verses.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Soft-hearted feelings mixed with sincere promises of valuable things in between the two. The aching in the chest comes from the hard to hold things, the wiping of the tears of joy, the caring so much. A wonderful poem with immense feelings...:)...............

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:)...........

[Eddie Davis]

That was a very gentle, deeply caring poem, heart-felt and loving. It is very wonderful to read.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie. How hard it is for a friend who wants to wipe the tears of a dear one but cannot do it. Prayers are only what I can do.