DIVINE EROS

DIVINE EROS

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
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Emotional and spiritual love

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You and I, we're perfect match
I am the bread and you're the butter
I am the ham, you are the egg
I am the flame but you're the water
Yes, you tend to make me cool
When I am mad and bitter

You and I, we're perfect duo
We always come as good partners
We dance with grace and beauty
We are both goo
d and soulful singers
Now we tend to live with serenity
And yes, we are both true believers

You and I, we're perfect fellows
You are my angel while I am your light
I am your flower while you are my sun
We both love to be in each others' sight
But a different kind of love which is not selfish
Yes, I dream of you and me in a different flight.







© 2014 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Not going emotional...this one appears to be something cool ...or silly(?) =)

Metaphor-
An implied comparison between two unlike things that actually have something important in common.




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I love this! This captures a beautiful best friendship. Everyone should have a friend that is the partner to complete this poem. Dhaye, beautiful job! I'm keeping this in my favorite's folder. 100/100. Thank you for writing and sharing this. awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Anne.



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this could be two lovers or two best friends...either way...there is that perfect balance...reminds me of forrest gump and jenny..."go together like peas and carrots"--

beautifully expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

"peas and carrots"...okay, another term I should use. LOL.
When you find a best friend, you al.. read more
I love this! This captures a beautiful best friendship. Everyone should have a friend that is the partner to complete this poem. Dhaye, beautiful job! I'm keeping this in my favorite's folder. 100/100. Thank you for writing and sharing this. awesome.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Anne.
Dhaye, this was light and fun, happy and peaceful at the same time. Very nice!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Eddie. I'm thinking of an emotional topic like an unselfish love but my heart tod.. read more
You and I, we're perfect duo
We always come as good partners
We dance with grace and beauty
We are both good and soulful singers
Now we tend to live with serenity
And yes, we are both true believers

Yes, perfect life can be spend with the help of each other. All songs and woe with someone is going to easy. Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for dropping by, S.
Saddam

10 Years Ago

You are truely a great artist of poetry. I read your all poetry, but sometimes I speechless could no.. read more

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Added on March 26, 2014
Last Updated on December 30, 2014
Tags: Platonic, love, friend, divine, eros, emotional, spiritual, relationship

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

Philippines



About
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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