IN MY DREAMS (Free Verse)

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I believe in forever
Hoping that one day
My dreams would come true
Somehow
Relying only on the voice of my heart
I dreamed of a thousand mornings
As ours
Many sunshine and moonlights
To be our soft blankets
As I embrace you tightly
Like holding you forever in my arms

There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter
And only you and I
There I can hold your hand
As I stay next to you
And smile on the next phases
Of my life
With you beside me
And yes,

It's always in my dreams.

Author's Note

Special credits to: Neil Aranda's "There is a Place" for letting me use a line same as in the said piece.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"There is a place
Where everything is fair
Everything is possible
No more tears of gloom
But only smiles and laughter"

A good description on heaven even in your dream to be with him for eternity. Soft imagery and sentiments in your words...Bravo.............

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Pax]

Sounds like heaven to me. Dreams have this heaven like surroundings when you dreamt of happy things. In my dreams, as I vaguely remember them it is usually bizarre and full of mysterious wonders. Sometimes in dreams I see faceless beings, but more often the familiar faces are there, the one that closes to the heart.

Forever can be achieve in dreams and heaven’s reality, how I wish it is true as it is still need to be proven. This piece has a smooth flowing words, it has a glowing feeling longing… I believed with that it is felt by all your readers pretty friend.

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Pax. Glad you like this one. =)

[Aethereal]

This poems follows thorugh on a universal psychological trait. A child feels good when her mother hugs her. In time the mother leaves when we grow out of childhood, but that lost child remains within us as it tries to regain that good feeling no matter how much we grow from our actual childhood. This ideal of love may only be found in our drems from then on. Love becomes an abstraction in the clouds.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Aethereal. I like how you interpreted this piece. Thanks for the visit. =)

[Frieda P]

A stunning read Dhaye...just luverly. Not crazy about the red font though it's too soft a read for that glaring color. Still loved it!

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Frieda. Glad you're here on my page again. =)

[NeiL ArandA]

Dhaye I have a piece that I have been trying to finish one time but could not seem to find the suitable words to complete it. It goes like this . Please don't laugh coz it has some similarities with yours. Only thing is that yours is finish and complete. It goes like this : If its not on this life. Its on another place and time. I'll find my true love divine...I dont know if its right but it goes like that.And its very hard to expound..So i gave up. I like the line There is a place ...i wrote a piece with that title. Its a place where true dreams all and do come true.Very nice choice of song...

[Dhaye]

hope it is not a big deal to you if i have the same line. i do not intend to copy a line from you, neil. the place i am referring to is a different place...a place in my dreams.

[NeiL ArandA]

No big deal for me Dhaye.. :) You're welcome to quote anything from me anytime..

[Dhaye]

ok, just because you have that line, i will give a credit to your piece as soon as i get back with my laptop. i cant even make a review to other pieces using my phone. i can only make responses to my own pieces. thanks for reminding me.

[NeiL ArandA]

You have seen it before.. It was my first piece posted here and perhaps my reason also to be here. Ikaw ha ,malilimutin kana ..

[Dhaye]

Nawala sa isip ko may line kang ganon, but I know you have that piece. I'm excited to express my thougths and emotion in this piece which is greatly affected by one of my fave songs (There You'll Be).

"There You'll Be"

When I think back
On these times
And the dreams
We left behind
I'll be glad 'cause
I was blessed to get
To have you in my life
When I look back
On these days
I'll look and see your face
You were right there for me

[Chorus:]
In my dreams
I'll always see you soar
Above the sky
In my heart
There will always be a place
For you for all my life
I'll keep a part
Of you with me
And everywhere I am
There you'll be
And everywhere I am
There you'll be

Well you showed me
How it feels
To feel the sky
Within my reach
And I always
Will remember all
The strength you
Gave to me
Your love made me
Make it through
Oh, I owe so much to you
You were right there for me

[Repeat chorus]

'Cause I always saw in you
My light, my strength
And I want to thank you
Now for all the ways
You were right there for me
You were right there for me
For always

[Chorus:]
In my dreams
I'll always see you soar
Above the sky
In my heart
There will always be a place
For you for all my life
I'll keep a part
Of you with me
And everywhere I am
There you'll be
And everywhere I am
There you'll be
There you'll be

Oh, ayan..andun yung "dreams" at yung "place"....favorite ko yan. That song is my muse in this piece. =)

[Scott Metro]

A loving surrender...sweet.
A pleasant journey into love.
Well written....refreshing..!!

Scotty

[Dhaye]

Thanks again, Sir. It's an honor to see you on my page.

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scotty.......