I SMILE (Free Verse)

the real one

After falling seven times
Here I am standing once more
Making the next steps
Performing the fine moves
Keeping on grip
My most precious gem
Which I don't want to lose
Not anytime
Never

And as I sigh with glory
I faced at the rising sun
And as I blink my eyes
I see those wings once more
And I smile...

Author's Note

Free Verse (vers libre) Poetry is written in either rhyme or unrhymed lines that have no set fixed metrical pattern.

Reviews

[Faceless Poet]

ahh, mother and I, smile as ever
for we, never want to lose that forever
even it is meant just for the moment
but it lasted in the heart's beating movement.

coming back with many smiles
even if the road maybe far, a million miles.

mother it is best to smile away
than to stay in despare, so we sway the boogie ways...

- faceless being

[Dhaye]

LOL. Am I your mother? I'm not that old to be your mother, nor you as young to be my child... you're really dreaming!

[Tate Morgan]

It isnt the times you fell that define you it is the fact you got back up

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Tate. =)

[NeiL ArandA]

A Book With A Rare Smile ....
I'm intrigue with the usage of number seven here. Do you know that God's favorite number ?
Seven really represents perfection. I like the simplicity and honesty of this piece.

[Dhaye]

thank you, neil. im on my phone now so its difficult to type words and punctuations. lol. im here out of town for the assessment of my students so pls pray for our success.

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok ... travel mercy ...

[Dhaye]

Yes, I believe that #7 is a perfect number...It's an irony- "I fall seven times"...means even when I made mistakes in my life, I am standing still, for each fall made me a stronger version of myself today. Positive coming from negative...as simple as that...."perfect fall".

[NeiL ArandA]

Well there is always Someone there that is Perfect to make that perfect catch for you. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are the rising sun of yourself to the heights of glory...A wonderful write...:)................

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Sami. I have a wonderful feeling right now. I feel blessed. =)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. Best wishes...:)..................

[Dhaye]

Thank you and best wishes to you also. Have a nice day ahead!

[Sami Khalil]

You too...:)..............