EVERY MOMENT

Just a simple expression of my gratefulness

Every moment
I want to see you
Hear your words
See your smile


I want to see you
In every color of your ink
Those words that show
Every piece of your heart
Yes, your heart...
A kind of heart that shines
In every corner of this room
It is the light
It is my light


I want to feel your touch
Through the gentleness of your words
I want to feel that you care
Through the voice that I hear
From those beautiful songs
That echo in this room
You are the light
You are my light...


In every moment.

Author's Note

I am blessed. I am happy. I am grateful.


"Things are never quite as scary when you've got a best friend."
----Bill Watterson

Reviews

[Chiradeep Patra]

Is the best friend GOD? Such a wonderful friendship expressed between a human and God if we think spiritually. I viewed that way and was blessed. Your description in the 'Author's Note' made me think of what you meant. We can be happy materially but gratefulness and blessedness are spiritual and a matter of heart and soul.

Loved it, Dhaye... your write ups are just amazing.

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much, Chiradeep.

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic to the bones. In my library...:)........................

[Dhaye]

Is that already romantic? It's not yet for me. LOL. Just an expression of how my best friend means to me...as my light.

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. Friend or boyfriend...lol...You are welcome...

[Dhaye]

.............. =)

[Sami Khalil]

:)......................

[NeiL ArandA]

Dhaye do you want praise or critique ?

[Dhaye]

Ah, you're free to do what you want...even both praise and critique...

[NeiL ArandA]

You deserves a praise here ... Color of your ink, corner of this room and echo of his song. This is a novelty.

[Dhaye]

Tse! Bola-bola, kwek-kwek, fish ball...samahan mo pa ng Coke para may panulak. LOL.

[NeiL ArandA]

Novelty is a chess word for originality and finesse . I could not find any weakness on your lines. Its smooth and clean. Medyo nasubrahan ng kunti sa asukal. Diabetes ang makabasa ...or Baka langgamin ka :)

[Dhaye]

My readers are too kind and I know they will appreciate this. If only I could always tell how grateful I am.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Stunningly romantic… being a hopeless romantic myself I throughly enjoyed this poem.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for reminding me...I'm a hopeless romantic. LOL
Thanks for dropping by!

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Anytime, always a pleasure.

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and hopeful desire of love in the poem. I like the strong scent to know and to hold someone near. No weakness in the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thanks, CP.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Deems fit for a song...
with the style this is written...
the inverted play with:

You are the light
You are my light...

seems you are as you say in the Author's note with this write...

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Glen.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...feeling better by the day...thank God...

[Dhaye]

Glad you're okay, Glen. God bless!

[Eddie Davis]

That was quite lovely, and certainly your joy is evident in this poem. Very uplifting.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Eddie.=)

[ms. barrie]

This is gorgeous, I absolutely love the lyrical fluidity throughout this write and
the eloquent loving, honest theme, imagery you penned here...

my favorite stanzas are the second and the last. Stunning poem, Dhaye...
thanks for sharing! :)

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much, BJ. =)

[ms. barrie]

you're very welcome, and i forgot to add...that i'm very happy for you...shine on! :)