LET ME (Rhyme)

dreams

Let me...


          kiss you now like it's forever
          hug you like there's no end, never
          hold you like when two hearts entwined
          You and I will seal the bind.


          give my love, my heart, my soul
          show my emotions, give my all
          unveil myself and enjoy the night
          You and I will take the flight.


          wake up with a morning smile
          look at you sleeping so fine
          touch your face and whisper this:
        "Thank you for that evening kiss."


          prepare the table just for us
         set your tie without a rush
         kiss you goodbye just for the day
        Things that make me happy and gay.


          touch the sign of our great love
          another angel, as white as dove
          dream the songs that I will sing
A perfect life, that's what she'll bring.


          enjoy this dream in my sleep
          hold the things for me to keep
          let them stay here in my heart
Tomorrow I'll dream another part...

Author's Note

Photo from: Google images

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[don't know]

Let me...
tell you that this is a lovely love poem written from the heart. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, dk =)

[Shaquana Adams]

Absolutely beautiful and touching. Great job :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, SA, .:)

[Antoñyo]

This one is BEAUTIFUL and spellbinding! Captures why we search so hard, wish for so long, pray over and over to the heavens...and why sometimes we turn to dreams to complete us.

Thanks for sharing

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for spending your time here, A. I always appreciate your visit. =)

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. I just saw this one Dhaye. Sp passionate and touching...Awesome...:)................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for love. I like the repetition. Made the poem stronger and the desire come alive. No weakness in the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, CP.

[Rachelle]

Very tender and romantic, Dhaye! Kumusta na?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Okay naman, sis. How about you? Kwentuhan mo ako via PM para may mabasa naman ako mamayang lunch time. Parang masaya ka now eh..makikibalita lang. LOL.

Thanks for the visit, ganda. =)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

I felt like I was on the roof top...
and hearing this from another...
and yelling the words at the top of their lungs...
just has the live feel and just keeps at you...
as a reader...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Glen. =)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...I'm feeling a bit better from surgery and the complications with bronchitis...just making my rounds again...Good day...

[Tina Louise UK]

Beautifully romantic, a soft and tender piece...enjoyed :) x

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tia. =)

[Eddie Davis]

Lovely sentiment, something most of us dream of at least at one time or another. Well said.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Eddie.