WAITING (Free Verse)

Just a picture of an old story...

We started like

No one can take us apart

We’re one

In mind

In heart

In soul

And with  that  pledge

I commended  my life to you

All of myself

As yours

And we’ve sailed

Through the tides

With a smile

But when the waves come

You didn’t hold me

And in a glimpse of an eye

I saw you

Sailing

Away

You didn’t look back at me

I tried to swim

Going to you

But you’re away

So far away

I want to live

So I didn’t give up

I tried to swim

And follow the tide

Because I want to live

For you

So that when you have the chance

To go back to me

You’ll see that

I’m still here

Alone…

 

Waiting for you.

Author's Note

No tear. No fear. A memoir...

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"And we’ve sailed

Through the tides

With a smile

But when the waves come

You didn’t hold me

And in a glimpse of an eye

I saw you

Sailing


Away"

Sooo sad and beautiful at the same time. I like the form too...:)........................

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much, Sami. =)

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...Any time...:)..................

[Faceless Poet]

a melancholic you
entwined with loneliness,
deep as the ocean blue

- Faceless Being

[Dhaye]

Just an old picture, fb
It's nothing but a memory
Now, it's a different story...

[Faceless Poet]

somewhere it does
a memory come to passed
just glimpse of what had been
written of what it seems