FRIENDS ( Nonet)

My first attempt to write a NONET

You are the one who makes me happy
You’re always there to inspire me
I can run only to you
You’ve been my angel, dear
I won’t surrender
I won’t give up
Forever
We’ll be
Friends…

Author's Note

Nonet - is a nine line poem. With 1st line containing 9 syllables, 2nd line - 8 syllables, 3rd line - 7 syllables, 4th line - 6 syllables, 5th line - 5 syllables, 6th line - 4 syllables, 7th line - 3 syllables, 8th line - 2 syllables, 9th line one syllable.

Reviews

[Giggling Star]

Very nice job on this Dhaye and it looks like fun. Thanks for sharing!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Star. Good morning there!

[Chris]

We learn to stretch our mind and "play" with our words. Form to fit life and life to fit form. Did this "speak" your tones or did you speak it's form? THAT is the ultimate question we ask when we ...play.

[Dhaye]

Have you chosen this one because of its tone or form, or it is a good subject for a lecture? LOL. read moreHave you chosen this one because of its tone or form, or it is a good subject for a lecture? LOL.
I'm afraid and ashamed because I can feel I might give the wrong answer.

[Dhaye]

Can you read the "read more", Chris?

[Chris]

Was the "newest" posted (perhaps reposted) by date stamp. Lecture? Nah, more a reminder to maintain awareness of your intent rather than just meeting a "form". And of course I'll read more - always do.

[Dhaye]

I said there... I'm afraid and ashamed because I can feel I might give the wrong answer.

[Dhaye]

What if I'll tell you it's just a product of my eagerness to make different forms/kinds of poems? Honestly speaking...I just want to meet the "form". I can feel that though it's concise, it has many slips. Please tell me...

[Chris]

Don't ever be ashamed or afraid to speak to or with me... we ARE friends and mark it by speaking our minds. Poetic forms seem like "games" and many match the rules and miss the heart. We get lost in rules sometimes was what I was saying aloud.

[Dhaye]

" Poetic forms seem like "games" and many match the rules and miss the heart."...Nice line to ponder. Thanks.

[Chris]

New thoughts, new flow... more you than before.

[Dhaye]

Hehe. You counted the "you's"? But the title became "Friends".
Or...new thoughts, new flow...new slips. LOL

[Lydia Shutter]

An overwhelmingly romantic nonet. Beautifully written, Dh! Lydi**

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Lydi. :)

[A. Amos]

Written with lot of passions, heart mind and soul. Simply enjoyed your poetry simple, honest and direct.

I been to yiur beautiful country, was staying in Manila and was staying in Marriott hotel opposite corniche.

Stay cool

[Dhaye]

Thank you, AA. Glad you reached our country. =)

[Author Unknown]

This is really nice . Only you I adore . Possible alternative ending .

[Dhaye]

My first attempt in writing a NONET poem. Thanks for peeking in.

[Author Unknown]

No idea that such writing style exist . You're very talented

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sincere words in the poem. I do believe love need to be proven with words and action. I like the purpose and reason for the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thank you, CP.

[Saddam]

We are one, body and soul
Only for you I fall
thanks for this new knowledge. For my view this is a good formet of poem. But you created a lovely piece of art. Beautifully crafted.

[Dhaye]

Thanks a lot, Ssadd. =)