A amazing poem. I tell the young people. We decide our journey. Good and bad. We will have to make many hard decisions in a life. I like the way you led to the positive ending. If we go with hope and love. The direction should take us to a good place. Thank you for sharing the beautiful and hopeful poem.
Coyote
A nice poem, a wonderful one to make you think about choices. I take it that you prefer to take the 'one less traveled by and that has made all the difference."
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10 Years Ago
Ah, that piece of Robert Frost? That's great. I'm just captivated by the photo and then some lines p.. read moreAh, that piece of Robert Frost? That's great. I'm just captivated by the photo and then some lines played inside my mind...so why not?
Thank you so much, Eddie. =)
Great stuff. You make me think. I like crossroads. They excite as to make choices is what being alive is all about. Not to have such choices is to be dead, or living under some heavy-duty socialism. We face a succession of crossroads every time we write a poem - this word or that, to rhyme or not to rhyme, to read or not to read. You made me choose to read. Well done! I like the pic you chose, too.
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10 Years Ago
Thanks, Orlando. Glad you have chosen the road to this piece. LOL. I really appreciate the kind word.. read moreThanks, Orlando. Glad you have chosen the road to this piece. LOL. I really appreciate the kind words. =)
Like they say: " Live and learn." Roads can lead us to Rome or get us lost . I guess sometimes we don't see the signs or the darkness that will cover our visions...A philosophical and romantic write...Bravo.............
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10 Years Ago
What you have said were all true. Thank you so much, Sami.
10 Years Ago
Wow. Thank you . You are welcome...:).......................
Tough decisions...so often perplex us. I have said before...God has to push or pull with clear signals.
I understand this cross road all too well.
Well done Sis.
Scott
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10 Years Ago
I know you'll understand and you can relate, big bro. Hope you can choose between Yin and Yang. LOL... read moreI know you'll understand and you can relate, big bro. Hope you can choose between Yin and Yang. LOL. Best wishes!
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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