Your piece reminds me of this timeless song from my favorite song writer James Taylor ...
I've been wanderin' early and late
From New York City to the Golden Gate
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
My daddy was an engineer
My brother drives a hack
My sister takes in laundry
While the baby balls a jack
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
I've been in the army
I worked on a farm
And all I've got to show
is the muscle in my arm
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
My mom she died when I was young
My daddy took stealin' and he got hung
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
Snakes in the ocean
Eels in the sea
I let a redheaded woman
make a fool out of me
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
This is very nice Dhaye ... I can relate to your piece ... I been doing a lot of wondering instead of wandering ...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
"Wondering instead of wandering"... lol, maybe that's right...but the wandering I'm talking about is.. read more"Wondering instead of wandering"... lol, maybe that's right...but the wandering I'm talking about is the wandering of the mind (imagination)...
Your piece reminds me of this timeless song from my favorite song writer James Taylor ...
I've been wanderin' early and late
From New York City to the Golden Gate
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
My daddy was an engineer
My brother drives a hack
My sister takes in laundry
While the baby balls a jack
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
I've been in the army
I worked on a farm
And all I've got to show
is the muscle in my arm
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
My mom she died when I was young
My daddy took stealin' and he got hung
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
Snakes in the ocean
Eels in the sea
I let a redheaded woman
make a fool out of me
And it don't look like
I'll ever stop my wanderin'
This is very nice Dhaye ... I can relate to your piece ... I been doing a lot of wondering instead of wandering ...
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
"Wondering instead of wandering"... lol, maybe that's right...but the wandering I'm talking about is.. read more"Wondering instead of wandering"... lol, maybe that's right...but the wandering I'm talking about is the wandering of the mind (imagination)...
A wanderer who lost his compass would end up in circle. But there is even more powerful than a compass or any device that could lead us back home: love and faith.
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for the visit, Gab. You always leave this page with such words of wisdom. =)
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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