You penned this one so beautifully, dhaye. The first few stanzas are moving and how wonderful it is to hear these words. It makes one feel so loved, cherished and valued. I do particularly like the last few stanzas as well for it spoke of reality. Almost everything is temporary so we must have courage to take chance...
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9 Years Ago
Thank you, Gab.
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Who knows in your repose you will have dreams in reality's highs and lows and it will make your poetry wonderful shows in days beginnings and at close...Bravo
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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