You penned this one so beautifully, dhaye. The first few stanzas are moving and how wonderful it is to hear these words. It makes one feel so loved, cherished and valued. I do particularly like the last few stanzas as well for it spoke of reality. Almost everything is temporary so we must have courage to take chance...
What a glorious transcendence... everything you created here is the beauty of the love found in the lingering lines of the letters, the wonder of life rising in the gentleness of your repose.
You penned this one so beautifully, dhaye. The first few stanzas are moving and how wonderful it is to hear these words. It makes one feel so loved, cherished and valued. I do particularly like the last few stanzas as well for it spoke of reality. Almost everything is temporary so we must have courage to take chance...
A gorgeous love poem. So many lines spoke to me - it is impossible to pick my favorite. The images and feelings you have described are truly breathtaking. This is going in my favs!
:) Julie
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you Ms. Julie. I poured out my emotion in this one. Glad you like this. =)
Hehe. I'm not a master poet, Eddie. You're flattering me, huh! But thanks a lot for the kind words.
10 Years Ago
You are welcome, but I honestly think you are quite talented. Keep sharing with us, for reading yo.. read moreYou are welcome, but I honestly think you are quite talented. Keep sharing with us, for reading your work is not only a joy, but we get to learn about different styles of poems.
10 Years Ago
Thanks for the appreciation, Eddie. You encourage me to pursue this passion to write. God bless!
This is very beautiful...touching..a wonderful tribute to your love.
You are a dear heart !!
Your words weave so easy..almost like a sirens song.
Very pretty Dhaye
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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