YOU'RE ENOUGH (Rhyme)

for a friend

Man, do you really see
That smile you brought in me?
With you, I know I'm free
The girl I used to be.

Do you really hear
My heart's genuine laughter?
That time of encounter
Do you still remember?

Ah, man, you are enough
When times get really rough
And things get oh, so tough
There's no reason to stop.

That magic word you said
It's still here in my head
From sunrise 'til on bed
Your word is my strong shed.

But man, you didn't know
I hate to see you go
Each day I can't see you
Had made my life so blue.

Ah, man, you are enough
When times get really rough
And things get oh, so tough
There's no reason to stop.

Don't you still understand
I'm in a lost command
Marching with a wrong band
If you won't hold my hand.

So, please, don't make me feel
This world's not like for real
Please show you're standing still
As friends, let's make a deal.

Ah, man, you are enough
When times get really rough
And things get oh, so tough
There's no reason to stop.

Author's Note

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[gabrielle]

There's always be this one person who has a magical effect on us. we want to share with him our delight in times of joy and during our darkest hour his simple smile/hug would take away our burden. it's a blessing to find that one individual who is worth beyond hundreds of person.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

True! It's a blessing to have someone beside you in your darkest hour...
Thank you so much, Gab.