Now I Know Why It Rains Today  (Monody)

Now I Know Why It Rains Today (Monody)

A Chapter by Dhaye
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For Shaira Joy

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It rains today
And I'm surprised
For I just feel the sunbeams
While I walk along the way.

It rains today
With a heartbreaking news
That echoes in the wind
And brings us tears, my dear.

It rains today
Not an ordinary scene
But will be etched forevermore
May you rest in peace, we pray.

Now I know why it rains today
The heaven mourns with us
In your leaving...



© 2014 Dhaye


Author's Note

Dhaye
Monody

A monody is a poem in which one person laments another's death.

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A sad poem. When it rains. Allowed us to mourn with the gentle or hard rain. I like the emotions and the thoughts in the poem. Always a pleasure to read your words my friend.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you. Just classified it as a Monody poem.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

I'm not a fan of form. I know good to test new types of poetry. Make us think and improve.
Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Okay. It's just me. I enjoyed making different forms, including new invented forms today. God bless!
great job on it I notice a lot of times when someone passes it rains

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks for the read and the kind words.
 wordman

10 Years Ago

you are welcome
Dhaye, this was as sad as it was beautiful. So sorry for your loss my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you for coming to my page, Jack.
Wow. This was sad and a great tribute to her. You have poured out your heart and soul in this one...May she rest in peace...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. We are really sad today. This afternoon is supposed to be our Teachers' Christmas Part.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Wow. Sorry to hear that...You are welcome...:)....................

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