Oh, though storms are endless, dear That road you take seems always rough Just look on life's good side, don't fear And learn the lessons from each gaffe.
Develop your strength from each snag A positive stance will bring you light For that you won't be lost or off track See each moment a gift to your sight...
I have told you before you are wise beyond your years and I think this sort of poetry proves my opinion! Indeed, we need to weather the storms and learn lessons during the tough times. Every moment is meaningful in some way. Beautifully said. Lydi**
I have told you before you are wise beyond your years and I think this sort of poetry proves my opinion! Indeed, we need to weather the storms and learn lessons during the tough times. Every moment is meaningful in some way. Beautifully said. Lydi**
An uplifting message dhaye. Indeed, for every storm that come our way, we shall treat it as a test of our strength and an opportunity/gift to improve ourselves. I don't really like to compare this with your "rain series", but content-wise i like this piece better. =)
Did you really read all pieces from that collection? Tyaga naman...kahit ayaw binasa. LOL.
Sin.. read moreDid you really read all pieces from that collection? Tyaga naman...kahit ayaw binasa. LOL.
Since I know you now more than before, your very honest word never offend me even a bit. Hehe. I know from the start that you don't like the series. Content-wise...kakasawa ang puro rain noh? Hehehe.
Thanks, Gab. Actually, this is an FB status but I decided to post here since it's also a poem. This will be included to my other collection VOICE OF FAITH.
10 Years Ago
i read majority of your writes. i just didn't leave comment in most of your pieces in the rain serie.. read morei read majority of your writes. i just didn't leave comment in most of your pieces in the rain series baka you'll take offense if i just copy and paste my comments...LOL
10 Years Ago
Haha! Dahil pare-parehong di gusto, copy paste na lang ang review? LOL. Lakas-tama ka na naman ha? L.. read moreHaha! Dahil pare-parehong di gusto, copy paste na lang ang review? LOL. Lakas-tama ka na naman ha? Lakas din ng tawa ko dito. Iba-iba naman ang concept non, ah.
So true and well spoken. People don't appreciate those gifts and take things for granted. They waste their life wasting those moments when they have them in their palm...A splendid poem...:)......................
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you so much, dear Sami. Only when we learn how to love every little thing we see we can find c.. read moreThank you so much, dear Sami. Only when we learn how to love every little thing we see we can find contentment...
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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