SILLY ME (Rhyme)

I'm childish, I'm silly
I am weird but funny
I want to sing and dance
But only in my trance.

How could I play the game
If I don't know your name?
Tell me, baby, tell me
Please let me hear and see.

Don't you want a singer?
Or you want a dancer?
Oh, I can paint you, too
Now can I go with you?

My voice can make you weep
My dance can make you sleep
My artworks can annoy
Now, will you play, my boy?

If you want to be bored
I'm just here to be called
I'm silly, I'm crazy
Do you still look for me?





*Silly has undergone one of the most astonishing semantic about-faces in the history of the English lexicon. In a thousand years it has gone from "blessed, happy" to "foolish." The transformation began with "blessed" becoming "pious." This led on via "innocent, harmless," "pitiable," and "feeble" to "feeble in mind, foolish." The relatedGerman selig retains its original meaning "happy, blessed."

From: Microsoft® Encarta® 2009. © 1993-2008 Microsoft Corporation.

Author's Note

I promised not to write from a "flashback" but this one still has the tone. LOL.
Someone has said to me I'm that one- crazy, silly, boring, annoying.
But only the one who's left by my side can tell...
******

Rhyme. A rhyming poem has the repetition of the same or similar sounds of two or more words, often at the end of the line.

Reviews

[gabrielle]

a poem with a happy beat =). i like it.

"Don't you want a singer?
Or you want a dancer?
Oh, I can paint you, too
Now can I go with you?"

I know that your intention in this stanza is on the positive aspect but it is not so much of my liking because it is as if the voice would all do these things in order to be accepted/fit in.

We are all crazy and silly in our own ways.

[Dhaye]

For me, the verse explains this statement: "the voice would want to prove what she has and what she can in order to be accepted/fit in."
But anyway, someone also told me that I should not explain and/or prove myself to anybody...so it's really not agreeable to some, because the verse appears to be explaining/proving myself to others.

Indeed we are all crazy and silly in our own ways. Being silly in few hours can make my day complete. LOL.

Thank you very much, Gab. Your eyes here make my page complete. :)

[Raymond Federle]

"I'm silly, I'm crazy I am weird but funny"- Yep that's me. Very well done. :)

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Raymond.

[Coyote Poetry]

A fun poem to read. Good to desire to sing and dance. Keep us young and hopeful. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thanks, CP.

[Pax]

I'm silly, I'm crazy, I am weird

~ me too, yet now just sometimes or so this few years, now mostly i see myself as weird. Being silly and crazy(in a good way) sometimes makes us enjoy life more to the fullest, it's part of living. I felt like this can be a good song for disco or techno... because it has a happy tune... very nice my pretty friend...

[Dhaye]

A friend said she want to read a happy piece from me so I made one and will be making more. Nagbabalik na ang Super Lola! LOL

[Pax]

hehe, super Lola na, di lang Lola... hehe :D then good to have you back!

[Dhaye]

Masaya magpaka-lola. Na-miss ko na nga.