Poem 15.  WAITING FOR THE RAIN

Poem 15. WAITING FOR THE RAIN

A Chapter by Dhaye
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A Haiku

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Rain, rain come again

Let the sprouts and flowers glow

They have been waiting.

 




© 2013 Dhaye


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This is another signature piece of yours depicting one of earth's most important life sustaining element.
I have a contrasting Haiku that is an old nursery rhyme

Rain rain go away
Come again another day
Rain rain stay away.

Picture was vividly portrayed, complementing the written words Thanks for sharing Dhaye.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the remarkable review, Neil.



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This is another signature piece of yours depicting one of earth's most important life sustaining element.
I have a contrasting Haiku that is an old nursery rhyme

Rain rain go away
Come again another day
Rain rain stay away.

Picture was vividly portrayed, complementing the written words Thanks for sharing Dhaye.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the remarkable review, Neil.
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lei
a beautiful Haiku, Kabayan!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Lei.
ah, the positive aspect of the rain, it brings life...but hopefully, not too much rain will come for i don't want another flood.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Same here, Gab. That's what I told Sami below. Hehe. I just missed making short poems.
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit, ganda.
Short but soooo beautiful. I love the rain...:)...........

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

Hahaha...:).................
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

:) :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

:)......................

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