Poem 52. THE PRICE

A Senryu

Cast the stone on me

Injure me with such sharp blade

I’ll endure the price.

 

Reviews

[lei]

aw Kabayan ang sakit nito...

[Dhaye]

Para sa mahilig manghusga ng kapwa. Anyway, I've learned how to become insensitive. Tanggap lang ng tanggap ng "bato". May karma naman. Haha!

[gabrielle]

cast the stone on me
make sure that it hit my heart
for vengeance is mine...

i am not so much on the 'martyr side' so the above came out. of course, it was patterned from your piece.

[Dhaye]

Nice senryu, Gab. Go on with what you believe. You know sometimes I'm like a witch, and at other times a martyr. It depends on my mood. Sometimes I'm in the mood to be vindictive, and sometimes the opposite...
Thank you, Ganda. Next time jokes naman ipo-post ko para maiba. hehehe

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok Dhaye here is the funny Senryu
A labrador barks
In the middle of the night
I got up and pee

[Mr.Boffin]

love it....dark and emotional!

[Dhaye]

Thank you so much for dropping by to my page.