Short Story 2. Two Letters From Earth

How many can see what I see? How many can feel what I feel? ---Earth

Dear Wind,

 

I see you again. I want to talk to you but my disability today won’t give me the chance to do it. I’m already mute and deaf. So I became contented watching you while swaying and dancing just like before. I smile when I see you doing that. You’re so beautiful when you dance. How I wish I could dance with you just like before. But I’m afraid you will just refuse and leave.

 

I want you to know that I just lost my voice but not my heart. I cannot hear but I can see. So I can feel you, and can see you every time you’re here.

 

I want to see you dancing forever. Your happiness is also my joy.  I will live with enough Wind. I breathe with you…because I am the Earth.

 

Yours,

Earth

***

 

Dear Rain,

 

I want to thank you for coming into my life. You made me feel valuable after being barren for some time. Now, I feel that more plants will grow on my bosom. I feel great.

 

I always see you dancing while singing. You are talented. I love to see you often with those moves and tones. They make me inspired.

 

But it seems that too much water will make me become muddy and slippery. Yesterday, a little girl walked on me and she slipped and fell. I pity her but I can’t do anything.

 

I hope that next time I know already how to absorb enough water to make people safer on my lap. I am still learning how to make everything balance in your presence.

Thank you so much.

Yours,

Earth

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Two amazing letters. I like them both. Letters are more personal and strong. We can tell a complete story in a letter and can hold the paper forever if we needed. No weakness in the amazing chapter.
Coyote

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I love the ideas which you demonstrate here, of writing to the wind and the rain, which you have accomplished with success, good work here my friend.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Sheema.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

You are most welcome, have a great one

[NeiL ArandA]

Hmmm Conversation between Earth and Rain . I suggest if you would and if it looks good for you to rename the title. Just a suggestion

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! It's not a conversation between earth and rain. The earth send a letter to the both of them: wind and rain.

[NeiL ArandA]

Opps wrong interpretation Dhaye ...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I understand. Please read the description above (under the title).
Thanks, Neil.