HEAL ME

There's a wound in my heart
Oh, please heal it, Lord
I have so much pains
that I can't carry alone.

There's a scar in my mind
Oh, let me do forget
All the miseries of this
Fragile face and limbs
They hit me in my face
Too many times
And tied my hands
So that I can't move.
Do I have to give up
My belief?
My faith?
My name?


There's a wound in my heart
Oh, please heal it,Lord
Just let me hear
One word from you and I know
I shall be healed.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Antoñyo]

Familiar for me, and I imagine for many at times in their life when overwhelmed...sometimes we just need that whisper of hope that reminds us that there is purpose, methods to the madness. And still, we are of little use to God until we are humbled, as "the plan" was never meant for just us.

Thanks for the share

[Dhaye]

Thanks, A.

[shangala]

this are words spoken just for me....

[Dhaye]

Thanks .

[shangala]

yeah they are. welcome

[lei]

moving piece, Kabayan. don't lose hope!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Kabayan.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Enjoyed reading your work..It speaks of your faith..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are encouraging..You can just type in Choka on your search engine and find some definitions and some sites that will help you write one..Sara

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sara

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

You are quite welcome..

Sara

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I relate to this, Ate. :) You put my unwritten prayer in appropriate words.

Do I have to give up
My belief?
My faith?
My name?

Those lines seem very perceptive. I like them. :)

[Dhaye]

Thanks, baby. Haha! Para ka kasing baby sis ko talaga. No one calls me here ate except you at nakakataba ng puso. You know, there are many young writers here but they pretend to be like old women/men for some reasons. I'm closer to people from Panay Island, too, because I feel we are just like neighbors.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Ate, ate, ate. Hahaha. Ako yung panganay sa 2 magkakapatid. It has always been my dream or wish to have Ates or Kuyas. So, nakakataba din naman ng puso ang matawag na "Sis" (though yan yung endearment ng Parish priest ko sakin dahil bagay daw talaga akong magmadre. haha) at "Baby" kasi sweet at nakakabawas ng edad. Haha ;)

[Dhaye]

OMG! You know when I was in college, muntik na ako magmadre. I have already the calling card of a nun from my instructor (his sister is a nun and his son is a priest). I'm also the eldest child among the 3 siblings. We're on the same sect. Baby ka pa rin compared to me. Hehe.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Wow.... Seems like we almost have the same fate, eh? Things are becoming way too interesting, Ate. Glad I met you. :)

[Dhaye]

Glad I met you, too, baby sis. Okay, good luck to your demo-teaching. God bless you always!

[Belle]

For me, this is more of a prayer than a song or a poem. A prayer of a heart that longst to be healed from the spear that broke her into tiny pieces... I love the music from the piano...

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Ms. Belle. :)

[Belle]

The pleasure was mine.
Always,
Belle

[Sami Khalil]

A sincere prayer of healing. Life can be full of pain and hurt and sometimes we need constant healings if not multiple ones...Bravo

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Mark Heathcote]

Heart felt expressions of faith & hope I like it a lot.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Mark.

[gabrielle]

This is very timely piece for tomorrow's mass Dhaye. Reminded me of my favorite religious song:
Lead me Lord, lead me by the hand
and let me face the rising sun
comfort me though all the pain that life can bring.....
napakanta tulog ako. Nice Dhaye!

[Dhaye]

LOL. Ganda ng boses mo, I just imagined it. Words from a kind heart is more than a beautiful song by a very good singer. Thanks, Ganda...

[GeaJaeStanzas]

This is an amazing poem
It gives a more meaningful impact that acts as a prayer and yes we do go through things in life that causes our hearts to be wounded, but the almighty picks up every broken piece

Thank You

[Dhaye]

Thanks for peeking in, Gea. :)