Poem 1. I WANT TO SMILE IN THE RAIN
A Chapter by
Dhaye
my plea
The rain is pouring
In this velvety skin
Making a poignant rhythm.
The tears, they fall
Like raindrops, too cold
As memories are recalled.
Hear, oh hear me
This heart must be free
Forever could be my plea.
Free me, oh free me
From this love into thee
A dream it will always be.
Am I just a victim
Or someone who's willing
To be captive forever?
No, please just walk away
Oh, memories don't stay
Freedom- I must say.
I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.
Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain...
© 2013 Dhaye
Author's Note
Featured Review
"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.
Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain..."
How did I miss this wonderful write. I got busy and I come back for a great treat of poetry...Bravo...:>)...............
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot, Sami. :)
11 Years Ago
You are welcome...:>)...............
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"The tears, they fall
Like raindrops, too cold
As memories are recalled."
loved these lines the most! awesome poem! :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
"The tears, they fall
Like raindrops, too cold
As memories are recalled."
loved these lines the most! awesome poem! :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thanks, nibhz.
No, please just walk away
Oh, memories don't stay
Freedom- I must say.
...
Posted 10 Years Ago
No, please just walk away
Oh, memories don't stay
Freedom- I must say.
...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you, Lei.
"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.
Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain..."
How did I miss this wonderful write. I got busy and I come back for a great treat of poetry...Bravo...:>)...............
Posted 11 Years Ago
"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.
Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain..."
How did I miss this wonderful write. I got busy and I come back for a great treat of poetry...Bravo...:>)...............
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot, Sami. :)
11 Years Ago
You are welcome...:>)...............
This reminded me of the favorite line from Og Mandino : " I love the rain for it cleanses my spirit" .
I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.
And smiling in the middle of the rain is such a gentle sunny disposition to stay upright.
Keep going, Dhaye. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
This reminded me of the favorite line from Og Mandino : " I love the rain for it cleanses my spirit" .
I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.
And smiling in the middle of the rain is such a gentle sunny disposition to stay upright.
Keep going, Dhaye. :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot, Ms. Belle. :)
The longing for freedom, for inner peace, is palpable in your words. What a powerful midi you have chosen to accompany your words! To break out of the role of victim is not easy, but it seems this character is on the right path. Rain is cleansing for the earth and for those who choose to walk through it....to come out on the other side. Very well written. Intense. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
The longing for freedom, for inner peace, is palpable in your words. What a powerful midi you have chosen to accompany your words! To break out of the role of victim is not easy, but it seems this character is on the right path. Rain is cleansing for the earth and for those who choose to walk through it....to come out on the other side. Very well written. Intense. Lydi**
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks, Lyd**. :)
With the rainfall comes release and freedom !
Splendid dhaye, you do have an affinity with rainfall and I think its tremendous !!
Posted 11 Years Ago
With the rainfall comes release and freedom !
Splendid dhaye, you do have an affinity with rainfall and I think its tremendous !!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Haha! You have a tremendous review, Tom. I didn't expect that you are going to read more than one pi.. read more Haha! You have a tremendous review, Tom. I didn't expect that you are going to read more than one piece in my page. I'm so grateful with your visit.
11 Years Ago
When the poetry and writing are good I like to read more !
I will come back to check this out one more time Dhaye. Its like i stumbled into a treasure chest . I love rain . It rain a lot where I used to live.
Posted 11 Years Ago
I will come back to check this out one more time Dhaye. Its like i stumbled into a treasure chest . I love rain . It rain a lot where I used to live.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks a lot, Neil.
This is an old piece, but after reading an inspirational story from my favorite writer today, I have learned something about rain. Now, I want to change my attitude towards it...because it's not as worst as I thought.
Posted 11 Years Ago
This is an old piece, but after reading an inspirational story from my favorite writer today, I have learned something about rain. Now, I want to change my attitude towards it...because it's not as worst as I thought.
"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh."
Photo gave life to the artwork. We need to dream, love and smile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh."
Photo gave life to the artwork. We need to dream, love and smile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks, CP. :)
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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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