Poem 1.   I WANT TO SMILE IN THE RAIN

Poem 1. I WANT TO SMILE IN THE RAIN

A Chapter by Dhaye
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my plea

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The rain is pouring
In this velvety skin
Making a poignant rhythm.

The tears, they fall
Like raindrops, too cold
As memories are recalled.

Hear, oh hear me
This heart must be free
Forever could be my plea.

Free me, oh free me
From this love into thee
A dream it will always be.

Am I just a victim
Or someone who's willing
To be captive forever?

No, please just walk away
Oh, memories don't stay
Freedom- I must say.

I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.

Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain...

 




© 2013 Dhaye


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"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.

Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain..."

How did I miss this wonderful write. I got busy and I come back for a great treat of poetry...Bravo...:>)...............

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:>)...............



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"The tears, they fall
Like raindrops, too cold
As memories are recalled."

loved these lines the most! awesome poem! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thanks, nibhz.
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lei
No, please just walk away
Oh, memories don't stay
Freedom- I must say.

...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

10 Years Ago

Thank you, Lei.
"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.

Just a simple prayer
Please listen, do hear.
I want to smile in the rain..."

How did I miss this wonderful write. I got busy and I come back for a great treat of poetry...Bravo...:>)...............

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:>)...............
This reminded me of the favorite line from Og Mandino : " I love the rain for it cleanses my spirit" .

I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh.

And smiling in the middle of the rain is such a gentle sunny disposition to stay upright.
Keep going, Dhaye. :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Ms. Belle. :)
The longing for freedom, for inner peace, is palpable in your words. What a powerful midi you have chosen to accompany your words! To break out of the role of victim is not easy, but it seems this character is on the right path. Rain is cleansing for the earth and for those who choose to walk through it....to come out on the other side. Very well written. Intense. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Lyd**. :)
With the rainfall comes release and freedom !

Splendid dhaye, you do have an affinity with rainfall and I think its tremendous !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Haha! You have a tremendous review, Tom. I didn't expect that you are going to read more than one pi.. read more
Tom

11 Years Ago

When the poetry and writing are good I like to read more !
I will come back to check this out one more time Dhaye. Its like i stumbled into a treasure chest . I love rain . It rain a lot where I used to live.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Neil.
This is an old piece, but after reading an inspirational story from my favorite writer today, I have learned something about rain. Now, I want to change my attitude towards it...because it's not as worst as I thought.

Posted 11 Years Ago


"I long, I like
I dream, I love
To smile. To laugh."
Photo gave life to the artwork. We need to dream, love and smile. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks, CP. :)

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