Poem 25. IN MY EYES

you are the best

I ask for someone to care for me
And you came with an open heart
I am a wandering soul before
Unwanted
Unloved
Discarded
By those who supposed to be my guides.
There's nothing else I would wish for
But your unending love
And may you stay strong
Always there to understand
My little stubbornness
Until I can stand
With my own feet
Until I am the one
To be your guide.
For in my eyes
Forever
You'll be the best,
my Mom.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

An endearing poem from a loving mother...I truly enjoyed reading your tenderness, Dhaye. :)

[Dhaye]

Thank you, Everett. You see, I'm trying to write in different point of views. :)

[Everett DeValle]

And I noticed...you were the baby looking up to the mom...and trying new things is a good thing...some times we fall on are faces and fail...but you know what...it makes you learn...it makes you better. :)

You are very welcome, Dhaye. :)

[Dhaye]

No, I'm the Mom. LOL.

[Everett DeValle]

Okay, the ending said, my mom...my fault, and my apology...but it wouldn't been neat to see that point of view...that's thinking outside the box. ;)

Nevertheless, lovely scribe.

[Dhaye]

I'm the Mom but I wrote this one in my son's point of view. Hehe. Just thinking his feelings to me when he start to see the "real world".

[Everett DeValle]

Lol that's what I was saying before, Dhaye. Naks naman lol

[Dhaye]

Naks..naks. Baka pwedeng snacks na lang? LOL.

[Everett DeValle]

Lol aye naman...nag tawa na ako lol puede ba an snack lol ;)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem for your mother. We need love and to be guided by a caring heart. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thank you, CP.