Poem 2. IT'S DARK HERE

And so I turn my back
from the mirror
which tells me how
blind I was yesterday.

Only to discover that
until now I am
for I can't see anything
around me.

Is it still raining outside
or 'til here in my room
the mizzle is drowning my face?
Or is it in my heart
where I hear those drops
and in my eyes
they find a perfect path?

It is dark in here
and I can see nothing but
a fading spirit...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and powerful poem. Hard when we learn. We are not so important. The great description create thoughts and vision.
"And so I turn my back
from the mirror
which tells me how
blind I was yesterday."
The opening lines were outstanding. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, CP. Such words from someone who's trying to open his/her eyes but can see only his/her own tears.

[nibhz]

a perfect sad poem, with the depth of touching the heart of whosoever reads it! good job! keep it up!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, nibhz.

[NeiL ArandA]

Have you talk to a publisher ? You have enough to publish a book . They wanted to publish my writing and poem but i don't have enough produce yet .And you have tons of it .

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

I have published my first 3 books at createspace.com and available now at Amazon.com. I have still to finish my other 3 books here. Thanks for the visit, Neil.

[NeiL ArandA]

Very impressive ! Ill check that . so I can order it . What title and author names was under to?

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Please go to my page. In the ABOUT ME section, I have included the link to Amazon and the books I'm selling. The titles are HEAR MY MIND 1 & 2, and A SUMMER LOVE STORY. Thank you so much. You are an inspiration to me as a writer. I am motivated to write more. God bless!

[NeiL ArandA]

Your welcome Dhaye .

[Antoñyo]

I normally mute music while reading...I couldn't hear. The music and words danced flawlessly
and the words,
"Or is it in my heart
where I hear those drops
and in my eyes
they find a perfect path? "
felt like they could have come from deep inside of me...but not as well.
Loved this and stashing it in my favs

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Antonyo. I appreciate your visit tonight.

[Antoñyo]

You are so far away...The sun is slowly rising here. ;-)
You're very welcome

[SyberRose]

Nicely dark Dhaye...enjoyed as always....Rose:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, Rose. :)

[wordwarrior]

Oh this is wonderfully dark and yet it reminds me that sometimes within the darkness, a clarity pushes through
This is a place I think we can all relate to. I know I can.
Excellent writing!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, ww. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I felt that this was unusual and your style is pristine.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Don't make me blush, Sheema. LOL. I can't thank you enough for your visit tonight.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Hi there, sorry for not being around very much, you are very welcome, it is my absolute pleasure, my dear :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very beautiful poem and that ending was out of this world...Marvelous...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Out of this world...Wow! You've seen this in different angle. Thanks a lot for the compliment, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)