Poem 3. WHY DOES IT RAIN AGAIN?

I thought it would be unclouded...

I get outside and feel
how the sun can comfort me
in my seclusion
but my skin does not go red
like what I presume.
There's no sunbeams
but only the mist which
lately turns into cloudburst.

It's raining again
and I have no choice but to
get inside and hide.
But the mirror reveals
how the drizzle had shaken me.
Was it in the bygone days
or it's until now?

Why does it rain again?
I thought it would be
a different day.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tom]

Perhaps the rainfall this time was within the heart ? But the sun will soon shine once more in due course!

A somber moody write, well penned with gutso and attitude !!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Tom.

[NeiL ArandA]

Rain somehow illustrates sorrow or heartaches . Perfect metaphor to use when we describe sadness . I guess when we are sad, heaven laments with us by sending the rain . When it rain it really pour so as they say ...

[Dhaye]

Indeed. Thanks for the time spent for my works, Neil. I can't thank you enough for this.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

I love the way you speak about rain here, a worthwhile piece, which I enjoyed!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sheema. :)

[Antoñyo]

Cleverly-written, and the last line is PERFECT! I wanted to know more...

Thanks for this beauty!

[Dhaye]

Thanks for dropping by, A.

[Talkless]

You turned this words to a beautiful piece of art....bravo!!! dear bravo!!!!

[Dhaye]

Thanks you.

[Lethu]

Since last year I vowed to never get caught by the rain again and one can say that I've managed to escape numerous times, that's just what reading your poem reminded me so thanks for the reminder hey.lol...

[Dhaye]

Thanks for dropping by, Lethu.

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poem. Sunshine to rain. Happiness to sadness.Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

I can't thank you enough for all of these, CP. I really appreciate your visit today.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend. I have time tonight. I will roam back.

[gabrielle]

why hide from the rain when you can play and dance with it? this is a thought that came to mind while reading this ms. dora. (lol). sometimes we must learn to embrace what we cannot control.

[Dhaye]

I don't know how to dance. LOL. It's just for the moment...sort of reminiscence. The rain is a good muse to create something when I feel like I'm wordless...
Thanks for the visit, my friend. I like the "black eyes" there, not a black-eye. Hehehe.

[gabrielle]

rain + coffee = memories.
black-eye. lol.

[Dhaye]

Coffee??? Oy oy...I didn't mention coffee here. I don't drink coffee. I like Energen milk and cereal drink. Hehe. Black-eye...glad you look like not being hit in the eye. Ahaha.

[gabrielle]

i was talking about myself. lol. rain and coffee deadly combination para sa nostalgia. lol.