"Should I stare at your window like a vagrant
For now I have so much fear in my heart?"
I like the above lines. Hard to find separation when heart want to hold on. Love can confuse us. Make us seek the safety of loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for giving your time in this piece.
"Should I stare at your window like a vagrant
For now I have so much fear in my heart?"
I like the above lines. Hard to find separation when heart want to hold on. Love can confuse us. Make us seek the safety of loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much for giving your time in this piece.
Tormented thoughts articulated through an artful vision, good work, my friend
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Artful vision...thanks for that compliment. But for others it's an annoying over-thinking power. LOL.. read moreArtful vision...thanks for that compliment. But for others it's an annoying over-thinking power. LOL.
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream.
I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me.
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