Poem 1. BEST FRIENDS FOREVER

A Limerick

What shall I ask for more, my friend?

You are the best, the last, I commend.

I shall not let you walk away

The man of my life,  forever will stay.

Just you and I until the end.

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

Nice to read these words of die hard commitment and loyalty, you seem to blur the line between friendship and lovers here, or I may be wrong, nonetheless, I enjoyed.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sheema. :)

[annabellee]

gorgeous write, so honest and sweet. I enjoyed reading it a lot :)

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Anabellee. :)

[annabellee]

you're welcome :)

[Ency Bearis]

Awesome poem recommended.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sir Ency. You should also read "My Cafe Friends and I" because I've mentioned the 7 of you there. Lol.

[Ency Bearis]

Really let me surf where and how you presented it.

[gabrielle]

Concise yet it speaks fully of the determination to fulfill a lifetime commitment. very commendable dhaye.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Gab. Glad to see you again on my page. Happy weekend!

[Rita L. Sev]

Fun form - good job with the limerick style. A great sentiment - friendship, and all of its joys, is the key!

[Dhaye]

Yes, thanks, Rita. How lucky I am having my bestfriend as my man forever.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem and I like the photo. Good to stay friends and enjoy life together. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thanks, CP. :)