Should Not Be A Friend To Claim

I am not a friend to you

For you I am a fool,

I am a dupe and never that cool;

We don’t have similarities,

Only differences and inconsistencies.

 

You’re like a book  of Metaphors,

While I am just a little brochure;

Your mouth was full of idioms

While mine has  Ironies  and Personifications.

 

Despite that I offered you

A friendship which for me is true;

You just frown at me in disgust

Like I’m a nobody to trust.

 

You and I, we’re opposite

Two different ends that never meet;

The moments that we talk and chatter

Were  the times we shared to attack  each other.

 

I now accept that I’ve never been

A friend to you, just stupid and mean;

So forget the time you knew my name

Each shouldn’t be a friend to claim.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ency Bearis]

If this is for me, sorry if I hurt you, sorry if I said something against you...this is so mean so mean,...hu,hu,hu,hu, ...snif,snif, sniff. I'm not that of metaphor, maybe I'm just an eyesore, so sorry if I gave you the sore eyes. ( Masakit at makati sa mata yon ) So dramatic ha ? I just carried by the background music.he,he,he...... Wonderful poem..such so emotional, " ang tindi , tagos sa kaluluwa, na di pwedeng iluwa " My smile. : )

[Ency Bearis]

pati tuloy yong sniff ko mali nadala ng hangin - sorry for the typo error.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. You always make me smile, Sir Ency. If proven nga mag-asawa yung relatives natin, I'll call you Tito Ency.
You're not that one, I promise.
Thanks for the time spent in this sentiment. You're always my mentor. :)

[Ency Bearis]

You're welcome.

[NeiL ArandA]

Goodbye to a friend that would never be ...
I'd rather be alone and just be free...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Haha! Thanks for the couplet, Neil. Actually, this is a product of momentary emotion. Friends are treasure to me. This friend is still my friend until now because I've win that person back.

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

Great poem, it's filled with emotions and reality .. it seems that it's related to a real life experience you had

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the visit Khaled. Yes, you are right. I am a friendly person. And I value friendship so much... in my real life and even here in WC. When I treated somebody as friend, that means he/she is important to me. But sometimes people are just too critical...and insensitive.

[Tate Morgan]

This is great.it delves onto the minds eye.Not what we see but what we feel .And that is where friendship resides

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tate. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"You’re like a book of Metaphors,
While I am just a little brochure;
Your mouth was full of idioms"
That is some good poetry. Thank you for sharing...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)