Short Story 1.  MISTAKEN

Short Story 1. MISTAKEN

A Chapter by Dhaye



                “I can’t lose you,” I said to him with teary eyes.

            “Then, what was that last night? ” he said with bitterness.

            “That’s a friendly kiss.”

            “But it’s not for me. I love you more than a friend so I must go.”

           

              He walks away while the raindrops start to fall.




© 2013 Dhaye


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I guess that is what some may consider the difference between making love and sex, emotions get all shuffled like a deck of cards. Nice kid.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Haha! I'm not a kid anymore. Thank you for the nice visit, MM. :)
A sad vision create by the words. Separation is always hard. Sometime life isn't fair. We lose people because we can't control the situation. Thank you for sharing the excellent tale.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

That's true. We lose people because we can't control the situation. Thanks for the insights.
I love this touching poem especially that last line. It was great...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. It is a teaser of my book My One True Love.
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I like...You are welcome...:)
OH That sounds touching and intrigiung to read some more of it...i do hope there's something more to it, can i?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Atiba, my dear. That's already Book 2. If you have more time, be familiar with the characters by rea.. read more
The dark story

11 Years Ago

oh...ooooppss...i didn't knew that..i was just visiting your profile and read that it's a story...so.. read more
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Ah, no one is stupid. Don't say that to yourself, and I don't even want to hear that being said to a.. read more
You have finely drawn this scene, nice work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm seems cool, a friendly kiss the whole night? keep wrting.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Excited :) hehehe kasi kiss lang eh di tulad yung sa lagoon lol :)
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Hehe. Magiging conservative na siya jan. Kakahiya namang malandi ang buntis, di ba? Lol. :)
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Ay buntis bilis hahaha. sigue na tapusin mo na para mabasa na namin :)
A teaser for my book ONE TRUE LOVE. Just finding inspiration to go on with the next Chapters.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Dhaye
Dhaye

Philippines



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