Poem 4. A Question

Author's Note

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

A crucial question mark, so carefully constructed.....

I think that you have done a fabulous job here, sterling, well done Dhaye!

I have one shape poem: CELLPHONECHIC
two poems which closely relate to the shape poetry genre: A FAIR ATTEMPT and SNIFFY INDULDGES, should you find the time, please stop by and take a look, thanks dear

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the R&R, Sheema. Okay, I will. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

This is stunning, I can't do like this, truly you are brilliant writer Dhaye and great writes. The contents is amazing.

[Dhaye]

Haha. Nakakatawa talaga ang avatar mo, Marc. Ang ganda ng sinasabi mo sa akin pero pagtingin ko sa avatar hindi bagay. Hakhak.

[Dhaye]

Oh, sorry. But I appreciate your compliments, Marc. Thanks. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Herheh :) k lang ah

[Dhaye]

Para kasing pulubi or someone na dapat bigyan mo ng lollipop. Hehe. Innocent child. Ang ganda ng magagawa mo tungkol dyan. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

oo nga :)

[Ency Bearis]

I have no answer for this question, except this is an interesting question. Nice concrete poetry dyahe with significance.

[Dhaye]

You always make me smile, Sir Ency. You know what? Because of that dyahe spelling of my name. hehehe. Mada-dyahe ka na naman nyan. Lol.:)
Thanks for the R&R. Wala yan. Solved na yan. Sometimes, my emotion for a moment can motivate me to make a poetry. After that, wala na rin. Sabi nga ng 3 idiots (favorite ko kasi si Aamir Khan), "All is well". Hehe.

[Ency Bearis]

oo nga pala na dyahe nako ng ilang beses...bat ba ganon..daisy na lang kaya ang palaging kong isulat..para wala ng mali. E mali - mali na ata ako.

[Dhaye]

Mali rin po and Daisy kasi bulaklak yon. Daisie po kasi combination yan ng name ng father and mother ko. Hehe. Cge po, Sir. Daisie na lang. Ako lang ang Daisie na ganyan ang spelling, baka mali ka na naman. Dyahe na talaga itong Sir ko. Hehe :)

[Ency Bearis]

Ah, I see, Daisie, unique nga yong pangalan mo. Y como si dese el nomre usted mama y papa? Ay Spangol na pala yong tanong ko sa yo. Sorry ha......nag rhyme yata.he, he, he..,

[Dhaye]

Whaaaat? I can't understand Spanish. Pwede, Bisaya na lang? Hehe :)

[Sami Khalil]

A most interesting format and a good write...:)

[Dhaye]

Thanks again, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)