CHAPTER I. ANGEL IN DISGUISE

     

        I don’t know why everytime he enters into  my room, I am scared of something.

       “Hi, how are you, Clarisse?” he smiled at me again and I saw his beautiful, white teeth.

       “I’m okay, Doc. Thank you so much for taking care of me,” I honestly said to him.

       “I’m just doing what should be done. I love my patients,” he said.

      

       He sat on the chair like he wants to stay longer in my room.

       “That night they brought you here,” he is trying to start the conversation.

       “I don’t want to remember that night,” I said. My tears tend to fall down again on my face. Why these tears are always irrepressible?

       “Okay, Clarisse. Please don’t cry. I won’t mention anything about it from now on. Let’s change the topic,” he apologized.

       “Why?” I asked him as I looked  through his eyes.

       “W-Why what?”

       “Why are you doing all of these? Is this part of your duty?” I just want to hear something from him.

       “I am a frank person, Clarisse. I’ll tell you honestly. I like you,” he said.

       I am amazed but my heart seems unhappy from what I heard from him. I am not ready to trust anybody.

       “How long have I been here?” I asked him.

       “A month.”

       “A month…and you like me because I am your patient for one month?”

       “No, I think I liked you since that night you was brought here.”

       “You are just consoling me. You are just helping me to recover faster,” I said with bitterness.

       “No! I like you, Clarisse! Please believe me.”

 

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Ang bilis nga :) bilis pa sa alas kuatro si Doc. lol at saka si Clarisse she cries tapos her heart also seems happy ng sabihin ni Doc. na gusto sya ni Doc. sa mga nakikita ko kasi Dhaye ang girl mahirap maka recover sa heartaches kaya tong moment na to na seems she happy parang confusing " I am amazed but my heart seems happy from what I heard from him." at contradiction sa feelings dito “I don’t want to remember that night,” I said. My tears tend to fall down again on my face. Why these tears are always irrepressible? just my thought Dhaye :) pero I like this chapter ito na ang simula ng pag-ibig nila ni Rico.

[Dhaye]

Oh, wala ng happy. Super sad na siya jan. Thanks. :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

This is interesting, do not know if he likes her because he has power over her and she can't go anywhere.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Anika. =)

[Pax]

LOL ~ ang bilis talaga ~ kung mabilis si ms. Vicente masmabilis din itong si doc...hehe

[Dhaye]

Mabilis na naman ang tapos niyan. Lol. :)

[Pax]

a month na ka agad ....hmmm... ok na siy~ much better! nakakatulong pala tong mga suggestion namin~!

[Dhaye]

Syempre naman. Kayo pa. Utang na labas yan. Lol. :) Many thanks to you and Marc.

[Pax]

hahaha ~ ganun na rin yun naka lista sa tubig ~ hehe ~ sandali edit ko muna yung chapter wala kasin internet kanina eh...

[Dhaye]

Sige, kanina pa ko waiting sa inyo ni Marc. Parehong naka-unpublish gawa nyo. Sabi ko nga, ano ba tong mga ito, ayaw ipabasa ang book. Hehe.

[Pax]

hehe ~ nahihiya di pa ready lol ~ ayan medyo ready na yung isa kong chapter ~ may error parin talaga ~ sigh!

[Dhaye]

Grabe kayo? Nahihiya kayo sa akin? Bakit ako walang-hiya. hehehe. Lol. Sadyang hindi na ako nahihiya. Mas madali magpa-edit kaysa mag-edit ako. Baka maloka ang lola nyo. Mahirap makita sa sariling gawa ang mali, pero madali pag sa iba eh. Lol. Hehe :)

[Pax]

hahaha ~ di naman ~ galing mo nga eh balilis kana maka pag sulat ako ngayon stuck ako sa aking book 2 ~ ngayon binabilikan ko yun book one para makakita ng way paano tataposin ang book 2..

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Hheeh yun din napuna ko pag tayo mag review sa work ng iba makikita agad natin ang mali. pero kung sulat natin parang di naman makikita agad hehe.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Di pa ako tapos Dhaye sa Spirit- pero meron akong Absolute Mist kung may time ka pwedi mo check :)

[Dhaye]

Dami mo kasi channel kaya di ka makatapos. Hehe. Alam ko na yan. Yung short stories and poems para dun sa ayaw ng mahahaba. Yung book para sa mga dakilang readers. Lol. :)

[Pax]

typo ~ balilis ~ i mean mabilis ~ oh nandiyan na pala si Marc ~ hehe ~ ganun talaga Marc naka program nakasi sa otak minsan kaya di na napapansin

[Pax]

kaya ako isa lang segoro yung sinusunod ko na libro dito sa wc yung kang Shep~ kasi na sunod ko talaga yun eh kahit mahaba ~ magaling naman kasi siya ~ at based on real events pa ~ kaya ako contento ako sa short story and poems talaga ~

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

:) that's good oo nga puna ko sa iba parang ka program nga.

[Pax]

ha? program nga? anong ibig mong sabihin Marc?

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Yung parang naka program na sa utak ng review na kung book kaliwali heheh pag poem ok :)