DIAMOND (Tanka)

Are you?

Diamond to sift

Richly genuine or a sham?

Sparkles delude

Like word crafted perfectly

But comes stealthily painful.

Author's Note

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

You are multi talented Dhaye. This tanka is very deep for me to understand.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

A person shines like a diamond...but each sparkle is like a beautiful word which is perfectly crafted only to hurt...

[NeiL ArandA]

Ok now I understood what it mean. Its very deep yet beautifully crafted words to describe this jewel

[Neon]

A true piece .. a truth of life you've expressed by taking an example of Diamond. Nice poem. Yer stuffs're short .. like it's a tanka. . . but your all stuffs i've read are much powerful as well. Keep writing.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Neon. You have only read my short pieces, but I have long writes, too.

[Neon]

Welcome, Dhaye . . . Oh i c, that's great to heart that you write long pieces too .. Keep writing :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Short but striking like a shimmer of light reflected from a diamond

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you, NBM. :)

[Inder24]

Beautifully written :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks. :)

[Helen Crutchett]

Gorgeous and sparkling Tanka!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Helena. it's nice of you to drop by. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

People are like diamonds.

[Tate Morgan]

Well We all want the love tobe as genuine as the ring that signifies it.It seems they are mutually exclusive and the simpler the ring the deeper the love

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tate. :)

[Ency Bearis]

Meaningful Tanka and nicely done.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sir Ency. Hear My Mind. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

All that glitters is not gold, just as all pretty rocks are not diamonds. Really well done, good use of Tanka form.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Rita. Well said. :)