CHAPTER III. TIMO AND HIS GREEDINESS

 

     She remembered the story about the land. It was given by Lolo Poyong, her father’s uncle who had treated him like his own since he grew upon his uncle’s care. The old man had a vast land that three fourths of it was already transferred to Timo’s name. Only one-fourth of it was given to her father.

       Timo was not happy about what he had received. He’s the only son and he wanted all of the properties and the money of his father should be given to him. But his father divided the land between him and his cousin, Armando. He thought that his father had a big savings in the bank and all was for him only. But after he discovered the truth that their house and the entire savings in the bank were enough for her lolo’s debt. Then he became a drunkard and started to sell parts of the land he had received. He enjoyed by living in luxury that his money seemed unending. And after he realized that he already sold out all of his property, so he wants to get the part received by Armando.

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[Pax]

My comments:

I came back to edit my last review as I finished reading this. Now back to this chapter. Short just the way I like it, no need much edit…hehe

My edition:

She remembered the story about the land. It was given by Lolo Poyong, her father’s uncle who had treated him like his own since he grew upon his uncle’s care. The old man had a vast land that three fourths of it was already transferred to Timo’s name. Only one-fourth of it was given to her father.

Timo was not happy about what he had received. He’s the only son and he wanted all of the properties and the money of his father should be given to him. But his father divided the land between him and his cousin, Armando. He thought that his father had a big savings in the bank and all was for him only. But after he discovered the truth that their house and the entire savings in the bank were enough for her lolo’s debt. Then he became a drunkard and started to sell parts of the land he had received. He enjoyed by living in luxury that his money seemed unending. And after he realized that he already sold out all of his property, so he wants to get the part received by Armando.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Okay. Thanks, bro. You're my great editor. =)

[Pax]

okay, no problem. I hoped it help a little, alam mo naman di tayo expert.. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ano, kanina ka pang umaga andito...til now, andito ka parin? Wow ha? Nagbabad ka ha? Tingnan ko nga now status mo sa ___. Hehehe

[Pax]

lol... di naman masyado... alam mo namang nadito lang ako sa camp...hehe

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the history given in the chapter. Greed is a bad thing. Make you take and steal from the family. Thank you for sharing the excellent chapter.
Coyote