CHAPTER III. THE VERY RUSH HOUR

I am standing at the façade of a ten-story building.  Morales Advertising, Inc. - the letters seems so proud to present the company of my first client. Every step I make was accompanied by more or less ten heartbeats as I can  hear it. Oh, no. I am afraid! My appointment with Mr. Morales is 8:20 am, and it’s now 8:10 am.  I blame myself for everything that happened. I blame myself for I overslept in having a good dream. If only I didn't overslept, perhaps I won’t have that beautiful dream which has consumed my time. Or if only I didn’t take a bath for three minutes so that I have enough time to find the office of this client on the 7^th floor.

“My God! Seventh floor? I have to take the elevator. Elevator, where are you…?” I whisper to myself while searching for the door of the elevator. If only Marian is here with me in this situation, perhaps she’ll laugh so loud while taking some pictures of me. Maybe I am again her subject in her foolish photography hobby. Maybe we will both laugh while teasing me about my nonsense painting activities.

Reviews

[Pax]

I see some awkward sentences here ~

"I blame myself for sleeping, having a good dream and taking a bath. If only I didn’t sleep"

~ why would you blame for sleeping ~ we need sleep ~ it's what humans do ~ lol(kidding)
~ what i mean, i think you need to rephrase it, for the meaning is quite something(alteast for me)

maybe somthing like this ~
I blame myself for i overslep in having a good dream. If only i didn't overslep
~ that sentence is just an idea on how i understand it ~ i can either be wrong in interpreting it ~ you can just rephrase the reconstructed sentence to your liking...
other than that I'm continuing on ~ so far its good!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Oh, sige. Copy ko na lang yun. hehe. Tama yun. tamad na ako mag-isip. hehe.

[Pax]

yan mas clear na :D

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks to you and your great idea. :)