Poem 32. Three Days Left

A Senryu

I have three more days

Last ember must smolder

Sing me your last song.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

very beautiful .. if I interpret "Sing me your last song" as "Sing me, your last song" that'd be epic

[Dhaye]

Thanks :)

[Pax]

natawa ako sa daldalan nyo sa baba...lol
anyways kaya nakakatako ito dahil narin sa picture choice mo ~ i thought of multiple personality ~ you know the thumb photo has also an impact to your piece kaya i carefully chose what will i put there... and to the piece itself its quite chilling a bit ~ maybe because of what you said in the last verse~ your last song or the middle verse ~ Last ember must smolder... it can take into many different angles kabayan... so the interpretation depends on the reader itself, unless you put something on the authors note it will come into different light!

a very nice piece!

[Rita L. Sev]

A riddle - wrapped in Haiku. Well done!

[Dhaye]

Thanks for dropping by, Rita. :)

[Brianna Brie]

Interesting Haiku. It amazes me how many different subjects can be used in such a short verse. Kudos!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, you're right. There are many interpretations in this piece and it depends on the reader's perception.
Thanks for the visit. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow :) means you are going to cavite? lol nice :)

[Dhaye]

Kainis ka, Marc. Why do you know what I mean, Ha? Lol :) Natakot nga si Maryanne, eh. Hehe. Iba kasi interpretation nila dito. Kalungkot kasi. Mahirap naman magbyahe may dalang laptop kasi dadaan pa kami ng Laguna, then to Divisoria, last pa ang Cavite...or direstso pa ng Tarlac kasi andun yong father ko last week pa. Huhu! So sad. (:

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol ako pa eh araw araw daldalan tayo lol :) sigue ingatz sa biyahi.

[Dhaye]

Diretso, I mean. Mali pagtype ko.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol naglindol kanina hehehe dito pa naman ako sa bentana ramdam ko ang movement!

[Dhaye]

Ha? Di ba dapat sa ilalim ng table ka pupunta para mas safe. Kakatakot ang lindol noh? Ingat lang palagi, and pray para safe. Aayusin mo pa ang HOME mo pag-uwi. Hehe

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Naayus ko na tapos may bago ako Half of my life, thanks pala sa suggestion mo heheh I really appreciate it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol tumakbo lang ako sa may exit na hagdanan e ako lang naman pa ang tumakbo wait ang iba di naman sila tumakbo kaya balik ako sa office :) lol wala pa pala music yung half of my life.

[Dhaye]

I am not literally speaking, Marc. Pag-uwi mo dito Pinas ang ibig kong sabihin...Aayusin mo yung HOME mo. Naiiyak kasi ako dun sa poem mo, I know it's too personal. Tanda ko rin kasi, first time tayo nagkakilala dito, yung unang comment mo ay doon sa piece kong BUILDING MY HOME. Sabi mo babae ang mas nasa-sacrifice. Matagal na kitang nabasa...manghuhula kaya ako. Hehe.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

lol :) wala nasa canada na sila heheh meron ng iba hahah.

[Dhaye]

I'm sorry...pakialamera talaga minsan ang pulis noh? Hehe. Sige, check out ko muna yung piece na sinasabi mo. Keep going. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol k lang alis na rin muna ako off ko na daldal uli tayo pagdating ko nga bahay.

[Horizon K.]

Wow, this is chilling! I have no idea what it is in reference to, but I am only imagining morbid things as the embers loose their last bit of flame...

[Dhaye]

Thanks, HK. I know this would be interpreted in different ways.
Thanks for dropping by. :)

[Androglossia]

You're scaring me! And your font style is a chiller. Whatever triggered you to write this must be something really serious. Nice Haiku but scary.

[Dhaye]

Haha! This poem really has many interpretations. For you dear Maryanne, I've changed it already. read moreHaha! This poem really has many interpretations. For you dear Maryanne, I've changed it already.
Thanks for the visit. :)

[Androglossia]

LOL, now that new font style and color made it less scary:) It's my pleasure!

[Dhaye]

Three more days I have to feel this life
for when it's time to wake up,
I have to come at the end of the line.