Poem 7. Love Me

You must love me completely

Love me like this is my last chance
 to be with you.
Nothing should be squandered.
 Cuddle me like your child.
Use me like a glass in your hand.

Love me like I am the last gem you have.
No part of me should be castoff
for something slight.
Use me as long as you want
until the last tick I have.
I am your time, your precious time.

Author's Note

You must love me completely...

Reviews

[Inder24]

Lovely poem. I really liked the second para .. Time is really precious and you have beautifully written this !

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Inder. :)

[Dhaye]

So much symbolism into this touching write....

"Love me like I am the last gem you have. "
That speaks out loud my friend.

The need for a hug, an embrace, is there,
You worded security or feeling comfort by some at its best,

Thank you for your precious quill.

- Elisa

[Dhaye]

Thanks. You inspired me a lot. :)

Aw, really, that's one of the reasons, I think I keep on writing here... so did you! with me...

[Dhaye]

Yeah. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem my friend. If I could go back in time. I would of made the night longer and held tighter. Thank you for the amazing poem of love.
Coyote

[Dhaye]

Thanks, CP :)

[Pax]

"Love me like I am the last gem you have" ~ how endearing... I felt the love, the warm feeling it brought... wonderfully expressed!

[Dhaye]

Thanks. I really love time. My motto in life is "Time is gold'. Lol:)

[Pax]

haha... akala ko sa special person to.. :D
for me time isn't gold...just silver...there are more things i laze around for...lol

[Pax]

and your welcome :)

[Dhaye]

Haha. You don't know it's about time? It's at the last line of this poem. Lol :) I used personification here. This is for somebody who don't love time...lazy...sluggish. Are you? Lol :)

[Pax]

hahaha... ako yun....lol...

[Dhaye]

Aray! (:

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

It is really true we have to spend our time wisely, love this poem it is speaks reality and I can relate easily to the flow of the words expressed. Thanks for sharing.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the compliment, Marc. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome always :)

[Carissa Marie]

Aww. I feel the emotions coming out from this. I wish I could tell this to someone. Great job!

[Dhaye]

Yes, and don't forget you must do it now. Use your time now. Love your time. Once it's lost, you cannot hold it back. That's the thought of this piece.
Thanks for the visit, gw.

[gabrielle]

This piece reminds me not to procrastinate (but i always do). Very well written piece kabayan.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Gab.