Poem 26.     Here I Am

Poem 26. Here I Am

A Chapter by Dhaye
"

Lost your love and found my fall

"

 

Here I am, watching the endless sky

As endless as my How’s and Why’s

River of tears I cry

As I beg now I should die.

 

Here I am, counting days when you and I

Walk  in one disruptive line

How we ended in a rapid “bye”

Am I deceived by your countless lies ?

 

Here I am, bathing in my bloody pool

Coming out of life so soon

I have to end my loads of gloom

My love, my life, I’ll  abandon.

 

Here I am, a helpless soul

Hear me now, my last devotion

I lost your love and  found my fall

But at last I found my emission.

 



© 2013 Dhaye


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Love your poem, I could feel lost of the emotions you planted in your words. Very talented. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Rachael

11 Years Ago

*lots
First off, I'd like to pass my admiration on your rhyming skill because it's one thing that I'm a sucker of. Secondly, I admire your proficiency in conveying simple words into emotions and transmitting them into the mind if not the heart of the readers. And finally you have a good taste with photographs:) I like photographs. I'm visual. You have a superior quality of work Miss dhaye, that you should be proud of:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Maryanne, I don't know how to thank you for so much compliment you just mentioned. I really write wi.. read more
Androglossia

11 Years Ago

You're welcome. You deserve it:)
Above all, here I hear the desolation of loneliness - of the need to share our deepest, simplest core with a reciprocal spirit. This is almost a prayer, but a prayed wish more than an actual imploring invocation of a deity. I enjoyed the poem. P.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Sir Pete. :)
So beautifully expressed!
Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Eileen. :)
"Here I am, a helpless soul
Hear me now, my last devotion
I lost your love and found my fall"
That is some good poetry...Well penned...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
really loved this one, you can really feel a sense of desperation or longing from the choice of words used.
also i really enjoy the music u choose to accompany your poems, they always seem so appropriate.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the visit. Glad you like this piece. :)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I did. You are welcome...:)
Azriel

11 Years Ago

no problem and thank you for writing it.
I can still felt the connection of love, though it is already end. The emotions settled into the state of wanting, wishing the two hearts to be reunited again. I just hope it will prosper into a meaningful love in the second time around.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dhaye

11 Years Ago

But I really cried this morning. Someone has ruined my day. Maybe that's a big factor how I've made .. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

11 Years Ago

Lol crying is normal :) just keep kicking.
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Lol :) Hope you are the moderator.
Such an emotional deep read, nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Dhaye

11 Years Ago

Thanks. It is something written out of being emotional for some moments.

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Added on April 3, 2013
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