Poem 26. Here I Am

 

Here I am, watching the endless sky

As endless as my How’s and Why’s

River of tears I cry

As I beg now I should die.

 

Here I am, counting days when you and I

Walk  in one disruptive line

How we ended in a rapid “bye”

Am I deceived by your countless lies ?

 

Here I am, bathing in my bloody pool

Coming out of life so soon

I have to end my loads of gloom

My love, my life, I’ll  abandon.

 

Here I am, a helpless soul

Hear me now, my last devotion

I lost your love and  found my fall

But at last I found my emission.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rachael]

Love your poem, I could feel lost of the emotions you planted in your words. Very talented. :)

[Rachael]

*lots

[Androglossia]

First off, I'd like to pass my admiration on your rhyming skill because it's one thing that I'm a sucker of. Secondly, I admire your proficiency in conveying simple words into emotions and transmitting them into the mind if not the heart of the readers. And finally you have a good taste with photographs:) I like photographs. I'm visual. You have a superior quality of work Miss dhaye, that you should be proud of:)

[Dhaye]

Maryanne, I don't know how to thank you for so much compliment you just mentioned. I really write with simple words but full of emotions, or maybe the right literary device for every piece. I thank Google for being too generous in providing me the photos whenever I need them. Lol:) Thanks, kabayan.

[Androglossia]

You're welcome. You deserve it:)

[Pete Langley]

Above all, here I hear the desolation of loneliness - of the need to share our deepest, simplest core with a reciprocal spirit. This is almost a prayer, but a prayed wish more than an actual imploring invocation of a deity. I enjoyed the poem. P.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Sir Pete. :)

[EileenMarie]

So beautifully expressed!
Nice write!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Eileen. :)

[Sami Khalil]

"Here I am, a helpless soul
Hear me now, my last devotion
I lost your love and found my fall"
That is some good poetry...Well penned...:)

[Dhaye]

Thanks :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Azriel]

really loved this one, you can really feel a sense of desperation or longing from the choice of words used.
also i really enjoy the music u choose to accompany your poems, they always seem so appropriate.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the visit. Glad you like this piece. :)

[Sami Khalil]

I did. You are welcome...:)

[Azriel]

no problem and thank you for writing it.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

I can still felt the connection of love, though it is already end. The emotions settled into the state of wanting, wishing the two hearts to be reunited again. I just hope it will prosper into a meaningful love in the second time around.

[Dhaye]

Somebody made me cry for some moments, and so I made this piece. Something apt for Loved and Lost...
Thanks for the review, Marc.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

But this is not your experience? lol :)

[Dhaye]

Lol :) Just an artist who wants to try other figures of speech in my piece. Hyperbole is also appealing. I don't want to cry a river of tears, and I don't want to die in the first place, huh?
It's my entry to LOVED AND LOST poem contest.

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Now I considered you as a winner with this piece :)

[Dhaye]

But I really cried this morning. Someone has ruined my day. Maybe that's a big factor how I've made this deep and emotional one. :(

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Lol crying is normal :) just keep kicking.

[Dhaye]

Lol :) Hope you are the moderator.

[Just Kim]

Such an emotional deep read, nicely written

[Dhaye]

Thanks. It is something written out of being emotional for some moments.