When You Fall In Love

I composed and performed this one for my sister...

WHEN YOU FALL IN LOVE

 

What made you fall in love?

What made you hear your heart?

Sometimes you smile, sometimes you cry

But still you never give up.

 

What made you wise and strong

though chances are so cruel?

Sometimes you feel alone

But your heart tells there’s someone

 

Refrain:

Someone to share with your soul and mind

Somebody to lean on and cares for you…ohh…

 

Chorus:

That’s when you fall in love

The time you say you do

You cannot hide into the world

That you are not two

But now you’ll live as one

That’s when you fall in love.

What made you wise and strong

though chances are so cruel?

Sometimes you feel alone

But your heart tells there’s someone

Refrain:

Someone to share with your soul and mind

Somebody to lean on and cares for you…ohh…

 

Chorus:

That’s when you fall in love

The time you say you do

You cannot hide into the world

That you are not two

But now you’ll live as one

That’s when you fall in love.

Author's Note

For my sister

Reviews

[Neon]

OMG! What a great melodious song you composed. Thanks for letting me know about this or else i'd have missed the chance to hear this beautiful song of yours. This's the best song and am glad to hear it.. and am sure your sister would've loved this song either as same as I loved this much.

You Rock, Dhaye!
Keep on!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Neon. :)

[captain]

a sweet love song. Lovely!
What made you fall in love?
"I don't know the answers to that, you just know when you do"
What made you hear your heart?
"when you fall in love i guess, its the time when its very loud."

[Dhaye]

Thanks for sparing your time, Captain.

[Dhaye]

My self-made music video is available now. Hope you enjoy. Please tell me if you have some feedback to improve it.

[Dr. Wood ?]

what a wonderful present it must have been

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Dr. Wood? I'm still working on it's audio format.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I used to dabble in song writing...still do now and then...my problem is that I cannot sing a note

[Dhaye]

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[Allen Smuckler]

It's a heartfelt, melodious write HMM...and I liked it a lot..
My only regret was I wanted more...another couple of stanzas..
I'm not sure if the chorus should be the climax and reveal all the secrets..
But your write and great as is....
allen

[Dhaye]

My self-made music video is available now. Hope you enjoy. Please tell me if you have some feedback to improve it.

[Joseph M. Shea]

Cool for your sister, So I guess there is music that goes with the words. I write songs my self and have even a song listed here, that you might get a kick out of. It's call" Then I fell in love with you" also has music to it. It's manyly a paino song in a miner key. I'd be entressed in hearding more. Good work, Joe

[Dhaye]

My self-made music video is available now. Hope you enjoy. Please tell me if you have some feedback to improve it.

[Sami Khalil]

A beautiful melodious song that is composed with elegance...:)

[Dhaye]

Thanks! I am trying to record it at soundcloud as suggested by Jack so that anyone could hear the melody.

[Sami Khalil]

O.K. Good idea. You are welcome...:)

[Dhaye]

You can hear it right now...Thanks.

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Jack...]

The lyrics are wonderful. It would be nice to hear the melody. I am sure your sister was very happy with your gift, it is beautiful.

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the compliment and the suggestion. I composed it and I can sing it with my electronic keyboard but I don't know how can I let people hear it here.

[Jack...]

There is a website called soundcloud and I think you can record it through this site for free just using a computer microphone and then post the link here. I have a song on this site and that is how I know. My song is titled "And here you come". I wrote the lyrics, the music and the arrangement for a female singer friend of mine. I really liked it so I posted it here.

[Dhaye]

Video is now available. I performed it myself.

[AYVID N]

I loved this song.

"The time you say you do
You cannot hide into the world
That you are not two"

- Such lovely wonderful lines! Just great!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Divya. My sister is strong, and I admire her for that. For sometimes loving doesn't end up in laughters... but still she's standing, facing the world with positivity.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome and I hope she gets the strenght to fight every adversity! All the very best from me to you!

[Dhaye]

My self-made music video is available now. Hope you enjoy. Please tell me if you have some feedback to improve it.