When You Fall In Love

I composed and performed this one for my sister...

WHEN YOU FALL IN LOVE

 

What made you fall in love?

What made you hear your heart?

Sometimes you smile, sometimes you cry

But still you never give up.

 

What made you wise and strong

though chances are so cruel?

Sometimes you feel alone

But your heart tells there’s someone

 

Refrain:

Someone to share with your soul and mind

Somebody to lean on and cares for you…ohh…

 

Chorus:

That’s when you fall in love

The time you say you do

You cannot hide into the world

That you are not two

But now you’ll live as one

That’s when you fall in love.

What made you wise and strong

though chances are so cruel?

Sometimes you feel alone

But your heart tells there’s someone

Refrain:

Someone to share with your soul and mind

Somebody to lean on and cares for you…ohh…

 

Chorus:

That’s when you fall in love

The time you say you do

You cannot hide into the world

That you are not two

But now you’ll live as one

That’s when you fall in love.

Author's Note

For my sister

Reviews

[Neon]

OMG! What a great melodious song you composed. Thanks for letting me know about this or else i'd have missed the chance to hear this beautiful song of yours. This's the best song and am glad to hear it.. and am sure your sister would've loved this song either as same as I loved this much.

You Rock, Dhaye!
Keep on!

[Dhaye]

Thanks, Neon. :)

[Joseph M. Shea]

It's a nice song, A bit sappy, for my teast. I like eagy stu ff. But I'm sure there are others out there that would love and like it. More than me. Take care, Joe

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the visit :)

[Horizon K.]

Wow you have a beautiful voice! The song itself, has a bittersweet melody. Very lovely lyrics/poem too.

[Dhaye]

Thanks, HK. Glad you dropped by.

[Barbara Walker]

I love that line-what made you hear your heart? So many times we ignore our heart's plea. Great poem!

[Dhaye]

Thanks! You can hear the notes....

[Just Kim]

Very nice and beautiful

[Dhaye]

Thanks :)

[Destiny Nicole]

This song is beautiful. Very nice. how long did it take to make?

[Dhaye]

What, the song or the music video? I composed it on January 2008 when my sister got married but had a problem with her marriage life, published here at WC on March 6, 2013 and made the video two days ago, uploaded at You Tube so that the notes are heard on here due to the requests of some readers.

[Sir Joe]

Ladies and gentlemen, we have a multi-talented artist here!
=)
Surprisingly beautiful!
I didn't know that we share the same interest in music. I also write songs. =)
The video is so impressive. =)
You surprised the hell out of me. =)
Just a suggestion, how about putting some images into the lyrics. Or perhaps, you may make some of the lines appear to be not so literal because some lines seem cliche to me.

Overall, I like it. It's like, "wow!"
=)
You have a beautiful voice. Write more songs! =)

[Dhaye]

Thanks! Your suggestion is good but it I think I won't have the chance this coming week because I will be on vacation at Tarlac and Cavite.
Anyway, thanks a lot, sir joe. Just tell me which lines should I change and I'll try to fix them if I have the chance.

[Sir Joe]

Wow. That sounds fun!
Can I come with you? LOL haha
I suggest you change the refrain. Sounds cliche to me.
Enjoy your vacation! (I wish I also have a vacation) =(

[Corset]

Bravo! bravo! What a beautiful song you are!

[Dhaye]

Thanks! Just tried my best to let readers know it is really a song, not only a poem.

[Corset]

well you performed beautifully

[Dhaye]

Thanks for the compliment. :)

[Corset]

yw :)

[Pax]

sad.... i can't listen to it here... sa pag balik ko nlng...nasa office kasi ako... mostly block young youtube and other sites...buti nga may wc... pero limited... hehe...
i love this... awesome!

[Dhaye]

(:

[Pax]

Bravo kabayan... bravo.... i love it.... galing mo!

[Dhaye]

Huhu! Hindi nagustuhan ni Sir Joe yung refrain. Back to zero na uli pala. Ayaw naman sabihin yung suggested refrain niya. Basta sabi lang baguhin ang refrain kasi sounds cliche daw. Wala na ko time next week kasi bakasyon ko yun sa Tarlac at Cavite.
Haha! Nagsumbong. Si Sir Joe kasi huli na nag-view. Kung noon pa sana wala pang video, mas madali lang kasi yun lang i-edit lyrics dito. Pero yung video, nasa You Tube na. Ulit uli ako? Si Sir Joe talaga...may minus to sa akin e, LATE kasi kami naging friends dito. Hehe.

[Sir Joe]

Hahaha, nakakatuwa si dhaye hehehe sorry na. Pero what I told you was just my opinion and my suggestion. You may or may not do it. If you feel the song is already in its best state, then do no changes to it. I think whatever the lyrics lack in thought or in construction, it is well compensated by the video, much by your voice and by the musicality of the piece.
=)

[Sir Joe]

Sorry if I wasn't able to review the piece earlier than you wished. =)
Eh kasi nakita q lang xa ngaung araw. hehe sorry n hehehe

[Dhaye]

Okay po. Next time magre-request na ako sa iyo agad to review my work, 3x pa para best ang kalalabasan. (:

[Sir Joe]

hehehe wow,nkakatuwa naman hehehe I suggest we create a group exclusive to filipino WC-ers hehehe how about that?

[Dhaye]

Good idea. Okay, you start it. Gusto ko rin makilala lahat ng kababayan dito. Tulungan tayo mag-edit ng works natin.

[Sir Joe]

Hehehe ang problema hnd aq marunong p maxado n gumawa ng group,,,,Pro I'll figure out how, =)

[Dhaye]

Di ba sa create group lang yun?

[Dhaye]

Nakagawa na ako. Paki-invite na lang po yung iba.

[Sir Joe]

Thank you, Dhaye! =)
Ok, I will.

[Pax]

naka ganti ka sa akin dhaye ha...kasi dito naman kayo nag usap sa thread ko...lol... anyways... kakabalik lang kasi ni sir joe kaya medyo late siya nag review sayo...diba sir joe... na isip ko rin yang group... segi mag invite tayo ng mga pinoy... medyo marami tayo dito eh.... noon kala ko kunti lang... pero baka ngayon lang yan yung iba mag online kasi bakasayon eh... pag katapos ng bakasyo eh balik na ulit sa life nila...be good you both..

[Sir Joe]

oo nga, Sir Pax. hehehe Pasensya kn,nakisali aq sa comment thread nyo hahaha aq nga start n nmn ng kabusyhan q bukas kya d n nmn cguro aq mkakapagsulat nito,hai,,,,I'll invite some friends pla to join the group para matulungan nyo dn sila. I know some who have just joined wc, kya tulungan ntin cla. =)

[Dhaye]

Headphone can make the audio more audible.

[Rhianne Ney]

Whoa, a song. This is a great one I should say. I'm trying to write songs but never succeeded with the proper tone, anyways this is something that only a great writer can do (:

[Dhaye]

Thanks again. I have many composed songs but I will publish them all here if I have recorded them and converted into music video.

[Rhianne Ney]

Oh, sure love to hear that

[Dhaye]

Music video is now available

[Rhianne Ney]

(: Let's see (:

[Dhaye]

Somewhat corny but I have given much effort to finish it so that the viewers will hear the tone of my composition. I know am not a professional performer and musician but I hope it made something to this piece.

[Rhianne Ney]

It's alright, trying hard on something is always a great effort