Afloat

Afloat

A Poem by AbraKadabra
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It may seem depressing but,ehhh i like it

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Afloat i try to stay in this endless sea of greif and doubt,

Sadness takes hold from everyside not unlike the dark swells of the open ocean,

The storm should seace as time wears on providing a respit from turbulent waters.

I await such a time; embracing and remebering the calm and peace that once before dictated this mighty ocean.

Unitl then, I shall ride this monster out with my head held high and my arms wide open, for all things shall come to an end.

© 2009 AbraKadabra


Author's Note

AbraKadabra
ignore the possible spelling errors for its not my strong suit

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This is very nice!
You are very talented at using imagery to convery your thoughts.
I didn't think it was very depressing, but it has a good message behing it.
Awesome work!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on January 13, 2009

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AbraKadabra
AbraKadabra

Spring, TX



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