Poison Venus

Dangerously beautiful, dangerously in love...

Poison Venus


Her ideology of various scents
is so carefully crafted, a device of strength
with a talented strategy masked in a smile
behind is a weapon, mixed with a lie

extravagant beauty, fragile in a way
her glances are sharp to take you away
her angelic voice so sweet to the ears
but she needs not to speak to drive you in tears

her heart is a treasure covered with thorns
her blood lusts for freedom in slavery's zone
she'll take what she wants for as long as it's free
and it doesn't matter the dangers she'll see

so if you must meet a woman like this
get a grip of your heart with care or you'll freeze
for her beauty will dictate what her heart will do
and her heart will capture you out of the blue.

Reviews

[gabrielle]

It's refreshing to read a piece telling the story of the other side. Most often men are portrayed as the villain and women the victims but in reality manipulative women are also everywhere. they tear not only the hearts of men but their fellow women, too. Creatively done. I like it.

[headoverheart]

yepp.. i'm not that evil, but there's definitely bad side in me, lie everyone else does, but women in particular are scary, because they use strategies and plan them very carefully.. phew. thanks a bunch for reading and reviewing!

[Jack...]

The seductress reaches, takes and releases hearts of men to the pain of knowing her. Nice.

[headoverheart]

thank you :)

[Frieda P]

Sounds beautifully evil, the type of woman who reels in her prey, only to throw them away. You've captured the manipulation creatively in this write, nice one.

[headoverheart]

its nice to know that i have conveyed the entire message. thank you for reading and i appreciate your review so much :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, you did a great job. :-)