dudes

dudes

A Poem by hallie
"

(no offence boys)

"
he saw you 
he met you
he wanted you
he liked you
he chased you
he got you
he had you
he loved you 
he got bored
he left.

-hallie

© 2011 hallie


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This poem is so true, this happens too much in today's world!
Your poem is just so to the point about something that happens all to often.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This piece was so brutally straightforward that I laughed. And sadly, this is too often the case in relationships. I think you captured that feeling quite nicely. Keep it up =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is cute, enjoyed this from begining to end. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on October 2, 2011
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