dudes
A Poem by
hallie
(no offence boys)
he saw you
he met you
he wanted you
he liked you
he chased you
he got you
he had you
he loved you
he got bored
he left.
-hallie
© 2011 hallie
Reviews
This poem is so true, this happens too much in today's world!
Your poem is just so to the point about something that happens all to often.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This piece was so brutally straightforward that I laughed. And sadly, this is too often the case in relationships. I think you captured that feeling quite nicely. Keep it up =]
Posted 13 Years Ago
This piece was so brutally straightforward that I laughed. And sadly, this is too often the case in relationships. I think you captured that feeling quite nicely. Keep it up =]
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This is cute, enjoyed this from begining to end. Nicely done.
Posted 13 Years Ago
This is cute, enjoyed this from begining to end. Nicely done.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on October 2, 2011
Last Updated on October 2, 2011
Author
hallie
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i love to play guitar and drums. i am a HUGE panhead (skillet fan)
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