My Thoughts

Something was on my mind and just needed to vent.

 I like to share my thoughts and I pray for my lord to hear my prayers.

 Is anyone listening, is anyone  there?

 I often wonder if the man upstairs even care.

 I know we all have our trials and tribulations but I can't help to figure out can we deal with what we are facing.

 I try and I try to go through this daily fight

 and think to myself where is the tunnel that has this light.

 We are all told we go through things to make us stronger, but does it really?

 Sometimes I ponder.

On the reality is there a bigger picture that is much more stronger.

 How many times must I feel the gravel on my face. I feel I can't take this much longer.

But there is something in me pushing me forward telling me not to give up.

As I think on this I wonder why should I give a F**K? But I do give a F**K.

 And the only thing through this daily Hell we walk in that comes to mind

 is that the lord let's me know that everything will be fine.

So I have to go by Faith and believe things will be alright.

 For the lord is my saviour and I should walk in his every lasting light.

 

Thank you all for those who took the time to listen!

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Boldly written but with clarity and purpose...Bravo...............

[Yellow Butterfly]

This is indeed a very bold and expressive write. Your thoughts create things.. and with these 'things' you start to question your existence. Great strength of character is portrayed throughout this thought provoking write.. You have been given a wonderful gift from God and this is displayed through your love of writing......enabling you to express your thoughts loud and clear.

YB

[DBrown]

Thank you very much!

[Tinkerbellje]

This is a very strong and clear poem. It conveys a message of frustration but strength. Well done!

[DBrown]

Thank you Tinkerbellje!!

[Tinkerbellje]

You're welcome :-)

[Tina Louise UK]

I think at some point in our lives we have all had these thoughts, a profound read my friend :) x

[DBrown]

Thank you very much. Sometimes when you have things to get off your chest, it's just best to write.

[Tina Louise UK]

Welcome hun x

[Dez H.]

Whoa Now that was some s**t I could really feel. Buck i see it in u bro. Your thoughts you put into words and that's what's up. I can relate to every single word you put on there from "I to Light" N***a you are the s**t, You're my big brother and confidant. If this would've sucked i would have no problem telling you like i would expect for you to do the same for me. But this piece was powerful. Hang in there bro, we 007's fight the good fight.

p.s You said you put this on facebook. Booo fuk facebook the cafe is where your talents are more powerful kid.

007 fo life.