Spring is Sprung

Spring is coming

back around.

Thawing us from

long sleeves & scarves.

Humid.

Rain.

Blooms of color,

taking place

through the gray.

Reviews

[ORBLE]

That wasn't exactly the best review I wrote. I re-read the poem and I do think it is well composed and effective. The title was thought out cleverly and I like short and simple poems like yours; just simple key words the reader can use to create their own image.

[kewlbluetiger]

I love spring! Thanks for capturing it masterfully in this writing snapshot! It was like reading strokes of colorful brushes.

[The Last Poetic King]

I like how such short poems can be filled with so much emotion. I will have one coming out soon, that you might like. I did enjoy this poem, because you know that a short work can fill someone with so many emotions. Great Job!

[ORBLE]

love it :) really effective and well put together xxx

[GunMetal]

"Thawing us from
long sleeves & scarves."
I pictured the sun melting the fabric off like ice, leaving them in more Spring-like clothing. Very good.

[Aussie]

Short and simple;I like it.And as expected of you,it flowed well and was well worded.Good work :)

[Hippy]

i like it short and smooth keep me asking if there was some hidden meaning but ill never know only the writer knows

[VioletRose]

It is a great poem about Spring but are you happy about Spring coming back?

[Huggy Bear]

Great poem about spring:)