Bleak

Simple passage, wasn't sure to put under poetry or story. Enjoy.

Life is looking bleak again.

Maybe I should start taking my Zoloft?

F*****g-A

Today has been s**t.

When will you call?

After I shave he replies.

Smothering.

Anxiety smothers you,

& all you hear is your heart beating louder.

& All you see is a bleak existance waiting for you.

Bleak Existance.

Author's Note

Comments?

Reviews

[Simply Profound]

This is simple, but enjoyable. It feels like a journal entry or something a little more personal than a poem meant for others to read, and I think that bare .... untrying-ness of it is what I like. It's like a raw written outburst.

I can understand why you found it difficult to categorize.

Very real.

I suppose it's easy to relate to that way.

[there is no more from m..]

Amazing I like this :)

[Aussie]

For some reason this reminds me of my friend saying I have 'Prozac moments'.
Lol but good work. And of course,I enjoyed the format.

[nostal]

This is true to many people.
Good job.