Four Months Now

The first gift you gave me was a shock.

A little music box.

You had one too,

they both played the same tune.

 

This was after I had betrayed you.

I've done this more than once.

Still, you stick by me,

without second thoughts.

 

I appreciate you,

I don't show it.

I love you,

but most people wouldn't know it.

 

Our past has been rocky.

Our future however,

secure.

After basic training I know you'll ask,

you'll be holding a ring.

I know you will, because I know you love me.

 

& I love you too,

Caveman.

Beast.

Boo.

I love you too.

Author's Note

Comments?

Reviews

[there is no more from m..]

Nice Poem its so cute
a beautiful Piece

[Helen Crutchett]

Good poem of the ups and downs of love. Natural and truthful.....down to earth as well. Thank you for submitting this to my Valentine's contest! ~ Helena

[Adela Muresan]

Awww :P:P
that iz so cheeasy! I love it!

wth can i say i hope it really works out for you guys:), and the poem is great btw :P.

A.M.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem a lot. Wrote with a honest pen. Life is a hard lesson. Must hold on tight to the good things. Don't come around too often. A very good ending to the poem.
Coyote

[Kyle]

A beautiful piece that concentrates on the relationship between the two rather then on the two. I like it was sweet

[DavidRyanM]

I enjoy how this piece weaves in and out of love and betrayal. Hope and heartbreak. That is very interesting to me and, for a young writer, very rare.

[Joe]

Nice would you look at my work? I posted a story chapter and want to know what you think...

[Alyssa]

Aww this is adorable, very personal with the nicknames and all, wish you guys well

[Tracie Skarbo]

This is cute and funny... the last stanza cinched it for me! Great job