Apologies

Apologies

A Poem by Hollywood
"

I'm sorry we thought you were the devil.

"

I'm sorry we thought you were the devil.

We heard your voice,

it was deep & raspy.

Like you had been smoking all your years.

You weren't scary,

in appearance.

Short, curled, white hair.

You walked slow but

you were talking to yourself

& entities that weren't seen.

We ran,

this is our apologies.

© 2010 Hollywood


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Hollywood
True story.

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An amazing poem & a cute poem

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Haha this is cute>

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Interesting...would you look at my work?

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Cute subject and well written!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awh. This is really good. It's really easy to get the jist of what you're stating. Nice!

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Hollywood
Hollywood

Stockton, CA



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I'm Holly, I am eighteen. I like feed-back on my writing to improve myself. I'm loud, sarcastic, always smiling. Sometimes vulgar, rude & judging. :] note: for read requests i generally read onl.. more..

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